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Work in Progress
Lay down
Come back to
Incomplete
Something is missing
Your eyes
Tell no lies
On the avenue
Miscellaneous
How far will it go
Fame
Fortune
Broke
Come back to
Incomplete
Something is missing
Your eyes
Tell no lies
On the avenue
Miscellaneous
How far will it go
Fame
Fortune
Broke
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Re. Work in Progress
16th Jan 2021 1:22pm
Re: Re. Work in Progress
16th Jan 2021 1:31pm
Thanks Lil
Off digital and back to paint and brushes
Like everything, always a work in progress
Thx for the read
Off digital and back to paint and brushes
Like everything, always a work in progress
Thx for the read
Re. Work in Progress
16th Jan 2021 1:27pm
A lot going on in that painting but I am going to keep that to myself, I only just got out of the straight jacket. You were centering for sure because this is beautiful. I love the beginning, we are all incomplete and looking for those missing pieces that we might find in another. Together making the puzzle much more complete, although so much of the time we find that someone takes pieces away which make us even more incomplete. 'On the avenue to miscellaneous' is perfect considering all the things, elements, and people we engage along the way. And then some consideration to what happens when combining all these things together.
Just one take, certainly not the only though, because it reads from a single person perspective as well. :)
Just one take, certainly not the only though, because it reads from a single person perspective as well. :)
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Re: Re. Work in Progress
16th Jan 2021 1:35pm
Some really good feels for the words and painting
Poetry and art work well together
Often the painting first and then a merge at the intersection
I appreciate the long comment
I might have to do the same sometime
As you know I'm prone to short and SWEET
Thx Kx
Poetry and art work well together
Often the painting first and then a merge at the intersection
I appreciate the long comment
I might have to do the same sometime
As you know I'm prone to short and SWEET
Thx Kx
Re. Work in Progress
16th Jan 2021 2:35pm
....your art is Perfect because it is a work in progress. And if that isn't confusing enough the strokes of your ink on paper in poetry paints the perfect picture of your abstract art on canvas! Salute Brother! ps sorry but this one goes on my R/L.
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16th Jan 2021 3:13pm
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Re. Work in Progress
20th Jan 2021 12:33pm
Thanks Wally
I expanded your avatar today and took a good look at it.
It's a dynamic piece of art itself always in motion ....
I appreciate your comment and I'm back in
the groove paint and brushes again.
Stay Tuned W
I expanded your avatar today and took a good look at it.
It's a dynamic piece of art itself always in motion ....
I appreciate your comment and I'm back in
the groove paint and brushes again.
Stay Tuned W