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flower
shall i just put you in a vase little flower?
let you stand up straight will do you good
let us admire you
your sparkle leaving no need for periwinkles
or ferns to buffer appreciation
let our eyes swell upon you
radiate your inner nature
feed us your pain and hidden joys
let us fondle your pointy breasts
as they just beg for notice
how they lap up eyes seeking them through
tight cotton sweaters
that gratefully hug that shape of you
for eyes to slide upon in broad daylight
why cant your ferocious lion
mime your way to my eyes
let me coddle you with my mind’s tongue
an afternoon mind delight
let me walk through your carnival
ride your mind till i find the source of your waves
so when you sleep
you feel words all up inside you
pulsating
till we put that lion to bed
let you stand up straight will do you good
let us admire you
your sparkle leaving no need for periwinkles
or ferns to buffer appreciation
let our eyes swell upon you
radiate your inner nature
feed us your pain and hidden joys
let us fondle your pointy breasts
as they just beg for notice
how they lap up eyes seeking them through
tight cotton sweaters
that gratefully hug that shape of you
for eyes to slide upon in broad daylight
why cant your ferocious lion
mime your way to my eyes
let me coddle you with my mind’s tongue
an afternoon mind delight
let me walk through your carnival
ride your mind till i find the source of your waves
so when you sleep
you feel words all up inside you
pulsating
till we put that lion to bed
Published 15th Jan 2021
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There's so much to gnaw on here, that my mouth waters!! I'm obsessed with floral metaphors. It's one of my favorite themes. That now known, you utterly caught my breath with..... "your sparkle leaving no need for periwinkles or ferns to buffer appreciation"....
I was a goner with your imagery going forward. Your lines are teaming with all that makes me adore erotica like I do. Lines reminding me with your unique, crisp and Omg sexy af lines to bask in, over and over. You tie it up in the most beautiful bow of your bullseye of the last line... Just a killer!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this read from beginning to end... soooo very much.
I thank you for sharing.
love,
🌹
xo
-B
I was a goner with your imagery going forward. Your lines are teaming with all that makes me adore erotica like I do. Lines reminding me with your unique, crisp and Omg sexy af lines to bask in, over and over. You tie it up in the most beautiful bow of your bullseye of the last line... Just a killer!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this read from beginning to end... soooo very much.
I thank you for sharing.
love,
🌹
xo
-B
17th Jan 2021 11:25pm
too flattering! i think i enjoyed your comment as much as writing the piece itself :).
very exciting to know it is sending all the right vibes...and worthy of repeat ... thank you!
very exciting to know it is sending all the right vibes...and worthy of repeat ... thank you!
Anonymous
18th Jan 2021 3:20am
Hey Poet........I must admit the title caught my curiosity Lol! I’m sure glad I stopped to read this beautiful ink of admiration.......a flower always blooms when watered with luv.......RL for me.......luv this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Jan 2021 11:02am
