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Engraved Of Smoke And Fire (NoPoo 64)
The tender affect
Of you
Became my fate
To fall deeply
Your ripples
Touched me so
Your name
Will not fade
As long as my heart beats
My breath keeps going
It lingers long
On my lips
Abandoning all
To love
Her love
Such strong desire
Dwells deep
Deeper inside
Wisps of smoke
From fires
Yet to merge
We whisper our passion
To the winds
In connection of everything
Of you
Became my fate
To fall deeply
Your ripples
Touched me so
Your name
Will not fade
As long as my heart beats
My breath keeps going
It lingers long
On my lips
Abandoning all
To love
Her love
Such strong desire
Dwells deep
Deeper inside
Wisps of smoke
From fires
Yet to merge
We whisper our passion
To the winds
In connection of everything
Published 14th Jan 2021
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14th Jan 2021 1:41pm
14th Jan 2021 2:00pm
Your words, C! .... Ohh my.
This is romantic, warm, with a heart on your sleeve kind of admittance that makes me swoon like a cartoon character in the clouds with cherubs around my head and bluebird's flapping... lol (you KNOW what I'm talking about!!) It's all that fuels my desire to be anywhere near your league as a writer and it keeps my love of reading poetry breathing in all it's glory, for another day...💞
Thank you for the resuscitation today.
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B-
This is romantic, warm, with a heart on your sleeve kind of admittance that makes me swoon like a cartoon character in the clouds with cherubs around my head and bluebird's flapping... lol (you KNOW what I'm talking about!!) It's all that fuels my desire to be anywhere near your league as a writer and it keeps my love of reading poetry breathing in all it's glory, for another day...💞
Thank you for the resuscitation today.
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B-
14th Jan 2021 6:24pm
Beautiful AP, I really love your ability to infuse your writing with emotion that transfers to the reader.
15th Jan 2021 7:41pm
