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Window like heart
Your lies are like pebbles hitting my window like heart.
One more blow from the wind and it all falls apart.
One more blow from the wind and it all falls apart.
Published 14th Jan 2021
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
14th Jan 2021 12:52pm
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15th Jan 2021 6:19am
Dear M,
You sure can capture heartbreak like no other. I love the imagery of the window like heart. How open and willing you are to receive but the putz just takes advantage with his stones of bs. This write resembles many past paramours of my own I wish I could leave behind. Well written. H🌷
You sure can capture heartbreak like no other. I love the imagery of the window like heart. How open and willing you are to receive but the putz just takes advantage with his stones of bs. This write resembles many past paramours of my own I wish I could leave behind. Well written. H🌷
