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caught up in a coffee moment
(1)
the kettle taunts with its charm
and I know I shouldn't, it's past midnight
you smell so good, like home
(2)
morning kissed me, the tv blinked
brushing it away, I unfurled from the chair
yawning and creaking like old wood
(3)
plodded to the kitchen, in lazy floppy bed socks
fresh water, flick of the switch
one more cup of coffee
the kettle taunts with its charm
and I know I shouldn't, it's past midnight
you smell so good, like home
(2)
morning kissed me, the tv blinked
brushing it away, I unfurled from the chair
yawning and creaking like old wood
(3)
plodded to the kitchen, in lazy floppy bed socks
fresh water, flick of the switch
one more cup of coffee
Published 12th Jan 2021
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12th Jan 2021 1:37am
I can tell you this with conviction, Lady. my old wood does not yawn and creak :),
an excellent compository , Lady. may I be the first to congratulate you
an excellent compository , Lady. may I be the first to congratulate you
12th Jan 2021 1:51am
So you say :P
Thanks' mister, appreciated muchly. I might twiddle around with it when it's not stupid o'clock. :D
Thanks' mister, appreciated muchly. I might twiddle around with it when it's not stupid o'clock. :D
13th Jan 2021 4:44am
The intimacy is in the details, terrific economy and subtle emotional presence in lovely proportion and equipoise. It is always a pleasure to cruise your surfaces Anita.
13th Jan 2021 1:56pm
Thank you Daniel. I do this so often that it seemed fitting to write about it. :)
17th Jan 2021 9:17pm
Most people over 20 probably have some level of appreciation for the life fuel that is coffee lol especially in the winter months, a hot cuppa is like a sauna in your mouth. That simile is kinda funky. *facepalm 😂
24th Jan 2021 10:10pm
I have the addiction too, but oh that aroma. The creaking like old wood resonated too – as I haven’t found the right combination of linseed oil to fix! Maybe some whiskey (or grappa) in my coffee will help. : )
24th Jan 2021 10:54pm
I think the aroma of coffee will always be my comfort place. I mix oils, but nothing to fix creaking...yet. Thank you for visiting DaVinci. :)
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