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lost my senses
My eyes are stuck they cannot move
Can’t find anything that can improve,
I have the feel but I can’t touch
And so I got this big a Crunch,
My nose is blocked and I can’t smell
And all the scents I can’t compel,
All my senses went astray
None have seemed to come my way,
They just stopped and I feel blocked
Like a statute cold and shocked,
I need freedom from this stun
A bit of meltdown in the sun,
To be able to revive
So watching you turns into thrive
Can’t find anything that can improve,
I have the feel but I can’t touch
And so I got this big a Crunch,
My nose is blocked and I can’t smell
And all the scents I can’t compel,
All my senses went astray
None have seemed to come my way,
They just stopped and I feel blocked
Like a statute cold and shocked,
I need freedom from this stun
A bit of meltdown in the sun,
To be able to revive
So watching you turns into thrive
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