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Chasing Butterflies
In the twilight's tawdry
of candelabra and sins
chasing butterflies
in the bilingual night
wrapping me in shadows
feeling the winds blow
in the folds of your arms
deep within my lost soul
chasing butterflies
from my grave
of candelabra and sins
chasing butterflies
in the bilingual night
wrapping me in shadows
feeling the winds blow
in the folds of your arms
deep within my lost soul
chasing butterflies
from my grave
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Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 4:37pm
Re: Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 4:41pm
I wrote that last night. Actually, I was in between thoughts on a
a story I am trying to scribble.
a story I am trying to scribble.
Re: Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 4:43pm
sounds like my stream of consciousness that I barely remember writing last night, so I understand. Regardless, it's a tender side of your darkness.... and it draws one in, completely
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Re: Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 4:46pm
My darkness grew out of reading too many books. In reality, my tickle bone loves redneck humor.
Re: Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 4:52pm
You're always such a surprise.... I love that about you, so much. I never would have thought that's where your inkling for funny, lied
Hee hee hee
I kind of see it now, in some of your funnier darker poems... your tickle bone influence.....
*giggles
xoxo
Hee hee hee
I kind of see it now, in some of your funnier darker poems... your tickle bone influence.....
*giggles
xoxo
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9th Jan 2021 5:23pm
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9th Jan 2021 5:33pm
Re: Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 5:37pm
I relate to that sentiment and concern, Adagio. I have been in that exact mindset. However, sometimes it needs to go where it needs to go... it drags us there... I've learned... lol
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Re: Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 5:42pm
I am leaving my mind's roadmap on the table. Letting it wander over bumps and seeing where it leads me. I am going to let that story I started, take me to...
Re: Re. Chasing Butterflies
9th Jan 2021 5:45pm
You absolutely should, Adagio... let that story lead you down it's own roadway, see where you end up. That's half the excitement... good luck 🤞🏻
I'll be excited to see....
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I'll be excited to see....
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