Jealous of your power

Powerful write, control, is a very powerful force
Dominance is sexy and frightening in the same kiss
Love it
Love and light
Ron xx

Control is a very powerful and seductive force for sure. Dominance is sexy as hell, well at least to me. Like a moth to the burning flames. lol 💖XxOo

Hahaha, love the need, the desire for the darkness of true love. Tight piece Lady

lol, Beautifully put I_IS_ME, there is always a desire for the darkness of true love. Can we truly experience the heights of passion while only basking in the light. I don't think so. 💖XxOo

DaMMMMn KX, ''Into the jaws of cold flames, burning '' & 'You leave me in an icy hot bed ''...best BDSM oxymorons ever!!! Your captivating write is an emotional and painfully sexy submission.....love it when unchained debauchery spills into poetry with such a sadistic yet an artistic and creative vibe.

What can I say, I like things extreme. Oh boy, I consider a sadistic yet artistic and creative vibe high praise. lol And I consider your comments creative and sadistic. No wait, not sadistic... but definitely creative. ;p 💖XxOo

Awesome piece, Kristina❣❣ I love the juxtaposition of pleasure and pain where pain morphs into pleasure over time. This passage touched me, " And sharply yours are so accurate" those calculated, deliberate actions of a wild predator stalking then attacking its prey. I love the description of this power-check pause, "So that the real top can clearly show " I am seriously enamored of your phrasing and creative word usage. 🌹💖

Wow, GW you really captured some things perfectly in that first sentence. And I like your choice of passages, identifying the predatory side but also the 'power-check pause' - love your word choice. I am over the moon that you felt seriously enamored. I appreciate your feedback and interpretation so much. 💖XxOo

There isn't much to say here that has not already been said..

Hey Numer, I really appreciate you stopping in and giving some re-enforcement. :) 💖XxOo

Like the vampire’s kiss – enduring pain to seek a forbidden pleasure. An unburdening of modesty and decorum as you no longer are in control of it. Your own admonishment for giving in, but that also thrills that you did. In a weird contrast you felt a sense of carnal freedom by being submissive.  A very insightful write and a pleasure to read.

Such great comments from everyone, I love it. The feedback and insights are great. Forbidden pleasure comes in many forms, pain being one and also like 'UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITION' it can be about where, when, and how. :) Being submissive can be truly rewarding in many ways and it cannot be underestimated the level of excitement that it can provide for a lover on both sides of the coin. 💖XxOo

So much fierce honesty
No fancy words
Coming of grips and whips
A really beautiful flower opened
Exposed, channeled and in place

Luxurious wanting of power and passion

Like

I like fierce honesty
No fancy words needed
Grips and whips, Like
And what kind of flower would you say it is? just curious
That about wraps it up

Power and passion, they are joined at the hip.

Really Like! your comment. ;) 💖XxOo

Give it everything you got.  Keep on writing.

You are on a roll, Francisco. I like giving everything in matters of passion and the heart. ;) 💖XxOo

hey there beautiful Kristina wowee what a powerfully hot write 🌹

I don't know what else to say other than you made my night! I really appreciate your comment and reading list add so much. 💖XxOo

Damn Rac (I shall call you Rac from now on until I am tired of it, which could be any time) you make some funny comments but I like these serious ones. :) I am very happy you felt the power exchange was very well captured. I prefer one to one but yeah some people like crowds. lol Brutally demanding, ouch, I mean yum. Method to measure makes me think of the last one I wrote and we still won't judge me by my thoughts okay? Thanks for the high praise. :p 💖XxOo

every moment a phoenix like chance to transcend.....a compelling vision Kristina

I always love the phoenix analogy and fits perfectly here. I am glad you could share my vision and experience with me. Thanks BC. 💖XxOo

A very powerful and insightful spill nicely composed dear poetess..respect

I do love very powerful, gives me the tingles all over. :p I am very happy you liked this one too, I know my mind is always putting out different stuff but variety is the spice of life. :) 💖XxOo

I feel you on that statement for its alright to spice it up from time to time 😁never put thyself in a box struggling to be free to be able to create from within the depth of the heart and soul and subconsciousness of your mind 😇

I enjoyed your spill immensely.
Ty for sharing  
Loved Swagger's art as your accompaniment, it ties together your write with sheer perfection!  
🌹  
xo  
B  

Thanks Blue, I am really happy you liked it especially being another connoisseur of such pursuits. I have lots of different emotions depending on when, where, how, and such. There are definitely many ways to experience something. 💖XxOo

It's an interesting engagement between Dom and Sub that really heats up a relationship. I hear that some people who hold powerful positions (in jobs, etc.) like to be submissive behind closed doors (and vice versa). Add to this love and passion and you're bound to create something that beyond special.

I really loved the key words being bolded, accenting visually, to make those words jump out of the page (are you subliminally hypnotizing us? JK).

Overall, it's an excellent verse, showing the passion between two who obviously have much chemistry and attraction.

Bravo.

Definitely an interesting relationship and I don't mind switching it up sometimes, I can be bossy. lol And I can see why someone who is in charge all the time would want to surrender that control sometimes. 'Bound' perfect word there Wally. I am subliminally hypnotizing you so you will want to give great comments always and it's working perfectly. Oh and so you will comment on my impatient formatting that somehow magically looks okay. 💖XxOo

2nd read
Even better than the first
Seer

Like
Again

Damn, I feel like I accomplished something to get a second pass from you PoetSpeak. Seer- Like!. Thank you. 💖XxOo

"You leave me in an icy hot bed  
As a prey for new psychotraumas  
I get up, stagger and kiss you  
I'm tamed and ashamed of the past "

oh yes, i do love this paragraph!

we may be drinking from the same kernel

Thanks for stopping by and the comment Poetrician. Probably my favorite lines as well and I am very happy you liked it. Maybe we are drinking from the same insanity. But sanity is boring... ;) 💖XxOo