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By The Fate Of The Stars, I Shall See You On The Moon
There is no greater love felt than sync of the minds
Prevailing by fate captured by time
Breath to breath, passion inhaled, exhaled of such beautiful carnal designs
Soft are your words that makes my beating heart sing
Divinity of soaring souls illuminated as Saturn’s revolving rings
Everything whispered to my ears, so true, so serene
Feeling the touch of tender caresses found only in majestic dreams
Stars when aligned twinkles, oh so bright
Space of the galaxy, we own the night
Shooting and falling into lover’s plight
A kiss to the wind, obscured of sight
Private dance finds of no other
Minds and souls, Angels’ wings weakened undercover
Taste of earthly rewards, as a full moon hovers
Not of this time, dimension twined celestial lovers
Steadfast pulses as passion unrighteous drifts
Look among the stars for my tender kiss
Erratic heartbeats, sinking pleas of reminisce
Promises of footprints we meet in the sky, granted upon a wish
Capture my floating bow tied in the skies
Dreams smile on sleepers, reality tells crooked lies
Given unto the wondrous of peace
Shh… a blanket of comfort to rest inside a soft silken need
Manifestations to awaken, tickled and pleased
Sweet talking all the way to my knees
Naked emotions better than any strip tease
No mentality of its greater lease
The extension of your soul slips inside with a gentle ease
To provide the comforts to the heart in a world of make believe
Devoid clouds of misunderstanding, rainfalls of mistrust
Psalms of my principles is heard, practiced is a must
Love and honor are the most part
To touch, the true essence of another’s soul is a once in a lifetime work of art
Flowers today withered of tomorrow
Standing in a vase of today’s thistles of sorrows
Believing and perceiving as sure as the day is long
Surrendering under the echoing of such beautiful symphonic undertones
Alluring lyrics of a melodic romantic song
Absence of malice greets your kingdom, juices to bask prolong
Hearts aflame, scorching kisses from dusk to dawn
No remorse, no insecurities, reviving stolen moments, time withdrawn
Kisses among the stars and then we’re gone
Prevailing by fate captured by time
Breath to breath, passion inhaled, exhaled of such beautiful carnal designs
Soft are your words that makes my beating heart sing
Divinity of soaring souls illuminated as Saturn’s revolving rings
Everything whispered to my ears, so true, so serene
Feeling the touch of tender caresses found only in majestic dreams
Stars when aligned twinkles, oh so bright
Space of the galaxy, we own the night
Shooting and falling into lover’s plight
A kiss to the wind, obscured of sight
Private dance finds of no other
Minds and souls, Angels’ wings weakened undercover
Taste of earthly rewards, as a full moon hovers
Not of this time, dimension twined celestial lovers
Steadfast pulses as passion unrighteous drifts
Look among the stars for my tender kiss
Erratic heartbeats, sinking pleas of reminisce
Promises of footprints we meet in the sky, granted upon a wish
Capture my floating bow tied in the skies
Dreams smile on sleepers, reality tells crooked lies
Given unto the wondrous of peace
Shh… a blanket of comfort to rest inside a soft silken need
Manifestations to awaken, tickled and pleased
Sweet talking all the way to my knees
Naked emotions better than any strip tease
No mentality of its greater lease
The extension of your soul slips inside with a gentle ease
To provide the comforts to the heart in a world of make believe
Devoid clouds of misunderstanding, rainfalls of mistrust
Psalms of my principles is heard, practiced is a must
Love and honor are the most part
To touch, the true essence of another’s soul is a once in a lifetime work of art
Flowers today withered of tomorrow
Standing in a vase of today’s thistles of sorrows
Believing and perceiving as sure as the day is long
Surrendering under the echoing of such beautiful symphonic undertones
Alluring lyrics of a melodic romantic song
Absence of malice greets your kingdom, juices to bask prolong
Hearts aflame, scorching kisses from dusk to dawn
No remorse, no insecurities, reviving stolen moments, time withdrawn
Kisses among the stars and then we’re gone
Published 7th Jan 2021
Author's Note
I feel like the moon is a very beautiful woman. She's in control.
Ravyn Lenae
Ravyn Lenae
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7th Jan 2021 1:38am
these few words upon your canvas are heart felt ( Psalms of my principles is heard, practiced is a must
Love and honor are the most part )
my friend
Love and honor are the most part )
my friend
7th Jan 2021 1:45am
Thank you my friend, I also happen to feel the necessity of those particular lines as well.. In addition, thank you for reading and then commenting. Please enjoy your evening as it gradually concludes and a blessed Thursday to you I am bidding
7th Jan 2021 1:47am
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7th Jan 2021 1:58am
Hum... today is Hump Day.. you are making me smile and slightly giggle here.. See... no one knows you are such a charmer such as I.. and a smooth talking one I might add.. I am wishing your evening remains as it.. very engaging my friend..🍷
7th Jan 2021 2:01am
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7th Jan 2021 2:23am
You know I will alway give my most humbling respect when it has been well earned by time
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7th Jan 2021 2:37am
😊..a smile is all I can offer... I will keep my sweet thoughts to myself
7th Jan 2021 2:00am
Beautiful! This celestial poetry is boundless in its picturesque beauty. Mesmerizing! I am truly in Awe !!!
7th Jan 2021 2:12am
What a stunning accolade my poet, and I must bow to the reverence of its merit and its appreciative sentiment behind the emotion, thank you. In addition, for taking the time to read. Please be advised I will pay homage and scribble upon your canvass as time allows. In as much, I am wishing you well in your travels within this new year and safeness. Have a great evening as time winds down as we breathless await the grace of Thursday
7th Jan 2021 6:11am
Favourite lines (not just because of way they rhyme but how they read in sequence):
Sweet talking all the way to my knees
Naked emotions better than any strip tease
No mentality of its greater lease
The extension of your soul slips inside with a gentle ease
Sweet talking all the way to my knees
Naked emotions better than any strip tease
No mentality of its greater lease
The extension of your soul slips inside with a gentle ease
8th Jan 2021 2:05am
Oh my wise poet thank you for taking the time to read and so beautifully summarizing you comment. You always make me feel my poetic musings is appreciated and I must thank you if I have never told you that. I am wishing you a relaxing Friday (TGIF) and may the weekend be pleasant to your presence as it greets you and keeps you
7th Jan 2021 11:26pm
8th Jan 2021 2:24am
I am definitely feeling this soft moon serenade my handsome poet, which you know is always welcomed and pleasing on my canvass. I hope you are being safe out there, and thank you for reading. Please enjoy your evening and may you have a wonderful Friday (TGIF) in the making
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10th Jan 2021 2:40am
The blue moon is in both of us wanting to do naughty things to each other. Be well my Erotic Queen of Love.
8th Jan 2021 00:49am
Bellissima, you are on a lunar plane. Like the Apollo astronauts, one can only dream to someday to touch your surface.
At the next hotel, I shall look out the window at the night sky searching for you. : )
At the next hotel, I shall look out the window at the night sky searching for you. : )
Mm.. you can meet me in Florence, Italy my love I shall be on the balcony of Baglioni Relais Santa Croce Da Verrazzano Suite, awaiting as we both glaze upon the Creator's beautiful creation. We shall sip of vintage wine. Thank you for the imagery of such a tender moment wished upon in the realm of time. May you have an invigorating evening and a relaxing Friday (TGIF) my wandering poet
8th Jan 2021 00:53am
Yes, a beautiful moon...Mars is waiting. Thanks for sharing. HUgs and peace, oral
8th Jan 2021 2:52am
After reading your sultry comment my Oral one, the simplicity softly speaks of receptive passion bestowed from the tenderness of my moon's illumination. Venus gently echoes to the hushed whispers of Mars.. mmm. In addition, I sincerely thank you for taking the time to come upon my canvass and bring such an enticing serenade. Enjoy the remainder of your evening on me and may you awaken to a pleasurable Friday (TGIF)
2nd Feb 2021 00:56am
Terrific work, elegance to your crafting with a raw evocative quality in terrific equipoise, lovely presence to your descriptors of milieu and metaphors. 💖🙏
2nd Feb 2021 4:18am
I must bow to the graciousness of your reverence in merit for taking the time to grace my canvass and ordaining it with such a beautiful accolade. I will return the tribute upon your page as time grants the allowance. Please enjoy the remainder of your evening my poet, and may Tuesday find you in great spirits, a sound mind, and peace bestowed upon you as your travel in your daily journey ...🍷
2nd Feb 2021 4:26am
Aw, that's so nice. When I signed on earlier, I came across people venting unhappiness in various ways, arrogance, contempt and it unsettled me, but I come here to let people know someone understands they post because they want to be felt and understood and I want them to know someone cares about that, wants to feel them and understand. Your reply means a lot to me and reminds me of why I'm here.
In kindness,
Daniel
💖🙏
In kindness,
Daniel
💖🙏
2nd Feb 2021 4:33am
A true spoken poet after the soft veil of my tender heart, and thank you, please enjoy and goodnight 🌹
