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The Sweetest Girl
With melancholy she’s drawing tears,
Sweet as saccharine, and just as irresistible,
Until there’s little else but sugared water,
Soaking
In an empty sundress by the field.
Sweet as saccharine, and just as irresistible,
Until there’s little else but sugared water,
Soaking
In an empty sundress by the field.
Published 6th Jan 2021
| Edited 11th Jul 2021
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9th Jan 2021 2:19am
Hello FMT, I like poems that are to the point :)
I wonder thou, if I may offer question?
would she be lying next to the empty sundress ? Rather than in the sundress? because if she’s in it how could it ( sundress ) be empty ? Just curious but I still got the message it was lovely thanks for sharing
Zazzles☺️
I wonder thou, if I may offer question?
would she be lying next to the empty sundress ? Rather than in the sundress? because if she’s in it how could it ( sundress ) be empty ? Just curious but I still got the message it was lovely thanks for sharing
Zazzles☺️
9th Jan 2021 2:34am
9th Jan 2021 3:52am
23rd Jan 2021 7:43pm
