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The Ring

Please copy and paste this link and listen while reading to feel what I’m feeling as I wrote this.
and as always, thanks for looking 🤗      
           
   
https://youtube.com/watch?v=h8MR3Y18wrM      
       
       
Love a loaded weapon of dreams        
nothing is quite as it seems        
compromises heavily one sided        
sparkling diamond presented        
In hopes of surviving      
       
dysfunctional ring-bearer partakes      
with his own selfish rage        
enjoying exclusive private parties        
day after day      
       
Her eyes watching, utter disbelief        
knowing the ring she cannot keep      
       
 
Written by Zazzles (Broomie)
Published | Edited 5th Jan 2021
Author's Note
This is my first attempt In trying to learn how to write a 50 word poem using unique words.
I am trying to get ready for the NaPo this March!
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