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Guardian
A sullen saviour sees only duty,
He acts as no Hero to anyone.
A lost soul that's seen to be striving,
but a deferrented deed is done and gone.
Horizons shine first at the break of day,
But foremost assist the dusk.
Half cup full, or half cup lacking,
Fill his with whiskey, and leave him to rust.
He acts as no Hero to anyone.
A lost soul that's seen to be striving,
but a deferrented deed is done and gone.
Horizons shine first at the break of day,
But foremost assist the dusk.
Half cup full, or half cup lacking,
Fill his with whiskey, and leave him to rust.
Published 6th Feb 2012
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6th Feb 2012 9:11pm
a whiskey drinker i do like this
always almost empty i must insist
thats just the cup that almost runnith over
not a drop will drip because im battling sober
intoxication is where you will find me
because that is where the greatest inspirations be....lol
always almost empty i must insist
thats just the cup that almost runnith over
not a drop will drip because im battling sober
intoxication is where you will find me
because that is where the greatest inspirations be....lol
7th Feb 2012 1:31am
11th Feb 2012 3:58pm
Anonymous
20th Feb 2012 5:42pm
hey this is an awesome poem...keep your pen flowing cause i like to read your poems
20th Feb 2012 7:11pm
thank you, I'll definately be continueing to write, hope I can carry on writing things people like lol!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
27th Feb 2012 00:21am
am sure you will find what they wont to read its kind of a hit or miss game but we all must try in the end, i think i've read all that you have posted here so i may just re-read again and comment again untill you post some new ones if you are out of subject matters just pm me and i'll try to help you out
27th Feb 2012 12:23pm
lol!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! I've recently gone back to work after a few week off, so Ive not had time to really tweek all the poems I have like I have done with these lol!!!!!!!!!!!
