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frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
Your strength is solitude and confident power
In your absence, my entire being
seems to numb in stagnant wilt;
I sunlight bathe, in your warm, boundless
and present attentiveness
Unfurling my tendrils;
stretching
So open and accepting
... is to know
your secret'd dreams
Seeing you- - the real you,
to reach in,
touching you right there,
Where broken
meets annihilated lonely
The hubris of soul tarnished hide and seek,
flares from my own heart's likened recognition
Where is that once spoken of bright light?
that was suppos-ed and protective
with reiterated surety
amongst all the dusty and well rehearsed pain;
Dark corners all shrouded,
like it's novel to be that erudite and clever
and of course....
You know that I know this subconscious ruse
Shadows becoming friends,
cherished or lovers
nothing left in the end;
lest unadulterated joint sufferer's
But...
To have this one chance
at a lost-until-now-known understanding,
is to be true midas touched
O'er the realized needed pleas
of forever and always
to remain uncorrupted
An unsuccessful secession of yours,
thankfully, not all for naught
Thine of my own precious mind..
with heaving chest,
to right, decide
A bended head calling forth
to those spirit's known to abide—
soon
a thaw to unfrozen...
from where whence I did hide
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 3rd Jan 2021
| Edited 4th Jan 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2020
Pic~ painting entitled: A long time alone
via Pinterest
Pic~ painting entitled: A long time alone
via Pinterest
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
3rd Jan 2021 11:34pm
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4th Jan 2021 00:15am
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3rd Jan 2021 11:52pm
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4th Jan 2021 00:16am
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4th Jan 2021 00:09am
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4th Jan 2021 00:14am
Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
4th Jan 2021 00:21am
Very interesting poem. Had to read twice to get the amazing flow and message. Thanks. Hugs and kisses. Peace. oral
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4th Jan 2021 00:36am
lol... I'm not sure that's a good it bad thing, Oral... but I do know that I appreciate you reading and I love your comments.
Thank you for your time and thoughtfulness
xoxo
B
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Thank you for your time and thoughtfulness
xoxo
B
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
4th Jan 2021 00:39am
The comment was meant as a high compliment on your great content. Enjoyed and always amazed at your creativity. Hugs and kisses, oral
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4th Jan 2021 00:40am
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4th Jan 2021 00:42am
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4th Jan 2021 00:43am
Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
BV this beautiful poem has so much depth and is so beautifully written. You are a true Romantic and this incredible write is so perceptive and emotional. It actually gives me hope. "Seeing you- - the real you,
to reach in,
touching you right there,
Where broken
meets annihilated lonely
The hubris of soul tarnished hide and seek,
flares from my own heart's likened recognition "........ Your words move me and that is power in prose . That is a true testament to your talent. Thank you for this amazing submission!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....ps that is a record Exclamation point response from the most liberal exclamation guy on the planet, LOL.
to reach in,
touching you right there,
Where broken
meets annihilated lonely
The hubris of soul tarnished hide and seek,
flares from my own heart's likened recognition "........ Your words move me and that is power in prose . That is a true testament to your talent. Thank you for this amazing submission!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....ps that is a record Exclamation point response from the most liberal exclamation guy on the planet, LOL.
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
hahahaha...
I enjoyed the exclamations, muchly ❗❗❗❗
(you needed these big emoji ones, Me thinks!)
Lmfao... Hee hee hee hee hee.... Your thoughts and insights are truly and deeply appreciated. The way you can see me via my poems is indeed unique and I'm in awe. I can't thank you enough, FF. I'm all overwhelmed and forgetting my words... but needless to say, I am grateful for you.
For the list add, all of your support and of course the exclamations as well.
(I'm not forgetting my bum appreciation!!! too 👍🏻)
💜
I'm a lucky Blue
🌹❗🌹
xo
B
I enjoyed the exclamations, muchly ❗❗❗❗
(you needed these big emoji ones, Me thinks!)
Lmfao... Hee hee hee hee hee.... Your thoughts and insights are truly and deeply appreciated. The way you can see me via my poems is indeed unique and I'm in awe. I can't thank you enough, FF. I'm all overwhelmed and forgetting my words... but needless to say, I am grateful for you.
For the list add, all of your support and of course the exclamations as well.
(I'm not forgetting my bum appreciation!!! too 👍🏻)
💜
I'm a lucky Blue
🌹❗🌹
xo
B
Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
4th Jan 2021 1:44am
A warm truth can sometimes leave us frozen in our tracks.
Understated heat in this one, Blue. Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Understated heat in this one, Blue. Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
Ty, bk.
I'm appreciative of your visit and I always love reading your insightful comments.
💜
*hugs back
xo
B
I'm appreciative of your visit and I always love reading your insightful comments.
💜
*hugs back
xo
B
Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
Dear Blue, this is a masterpiece❣❣I am thrilled by your word choices...they elevate my spirit and make me feel downright learned. This sapiosexualist is well fed by this beautiful piece. This is one of my favorite passages, "The hubris of soul tarnished hide and seek,
flares from my own heart's likened recognition" Bravissima sweet S❤
flares from my own heart's likened recognition" Bravissima sweet S❤
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
4th Jan 2021 7:33pm
Dearest B,
🌹
My love for this comment knows no bounds. I'm so grateful for your precise explanations and the resonance you feel. It feeds this sapiosexual's mental desires as well.
Much love,
💜🌹💜
xo
Blue
🌹
My love for this comment knows no bounds. I'm so grateful for your precise explanations and the resonance you feel. It feeds this sapiosexual's mental desires as well.
Much love,
💜🌹💜
xo
Blue
Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
I enjoy anything that has to do with nature
U need to start collecting your favorite poetry you’ve written because you need an agent!
Your poems each day grow I enjoy your mind and soul ..
Write on sister ✍️
Love
Jackie xo 😘
U need to start collecting your favorite poetry you’ve written because you need an agent!
Your poems each day grow I enjoy your mind and soul ..
Write on sister ✍️
Love
Jackie xo 😘
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
4th Jan 2021 8:23pm
You're very very kind in your thoughts Jackie. My poetry is still barely in its infancy (I feel) I only just recently started to be able to hit 'submit' when publishing, without palm sweat and butterflies. Writing poetry in earnest close to daily, didn't start until the beginning of August of this year. So my road to go is still far far far to travel... I don't have technical skills and I'm sure my grammar and punctuation are horrid.. Lmfao!! I kinda like that sloppiness and I shall claim it as my personal flavor/style vs the truth = which is lack of knowledge/skill... hahahaha... Your support and gorgeous thoughtfulness make me smile. I gain more confidence just by reading your comments and I remain hopeful that one day I can get to that point of acknowledgement... dreams are fun.
Ty Ty Ty.
🌹
Loads of lovin's and smooches
💘💐🌺🌷🌸🌻🌹🌼🥀💘
xo
Ty Ty Ty.
🌹
Loads of lovin's and smooches
💘💐🌺🌷🌸🌻🌹🌼🥀💘
xo
Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
5th Jan 2021 00:35am
This feels like Dickinson or Bronte of today. Masterful and pure. Midas touch is absolutely right. I love it--straight to my reading list!♥️
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
5th Jan 2021 2:36am
Wow, Margo..
That's quite something to read! I'm utterly amazed and grateful for your lovely comments.
and the RL add is certainly appreciated deeply.
💜
xoxo
B
That's quite something to read! I'm utterly amazed and grateful for your lovely comments.
and the RL add is certainly appreciated deeply.
💜
xoxo
B
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5th Jan 2021 4:59am
Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
5th Jan 2021 1:27am
Intimate direct feel of the epistle style, potency of brevity, though I would like to see the monologue interspersed with some milieu and haptics to give it full dimensions. Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
Daniel... touchy feely descriptions and environmental cues?? Imma getting a freaking gold star 🌟 tonight, dammit!! vocabulary 101..Ohhh HELL YEAH. I nailed it... (me thinks)
Ok, I see your point there... I agree (if I'm correct in my definitions.. eek!) Ty for sharing that information and I believe that there's potential for a redux (I love doing them anyway) in this poems future... Only because it'll be an interesting process for me to learn, too... Ty, my friend.
Love your visits, bunches.
💜
🙏 🌹
xo
-Susan
Ok, I see your point there... I agree (if I'm correct in my definitions.. eek!) Ty for sharing that information and I believe that there's potential for a redux (I love doing them anyway) in this poems future... Only because it'll be an interesting process for me to learn, too... Ty, my friend.
Love your visits, bunches.
💜
🙏 🌹
xo
-Susan
Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
7th Jan 2021 4:43am
I learned the words milieu and haptics reading some Harvard smartypants book where I had to define a dozen words to understand them, with of course the knowledge that the average person would have to look up a few dozen words to understand them. lol Anyhow they are very precise definitions of the 3 rotating dimensions I tend to employ in a write: monologue, haptics and milieu. It's an effective technique to keep the write changing, like when you read a novel, they do one chapter about this character, another chapter about that character, always keep you aching and wanting.
It's my pleasure sugah. 😘💖🙏 Still reeling from the days events. Probably sign off and meditate soon.
It's my pleasure sugah. 😘💖🙏 Still reeling from the days events. Probably sign off and meditate soon.
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Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
5th Jan 2021 1:58am
I like the anticipation of something beginning to show its beauty and mystery as the ice melts away. The pic ads an excellent touch, making us feel those emotions right along with you.
Great work Blue
Great work Blue
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Re: Re. frozen perceptions and warm truths ~An ode to thaw
5th Jan 2021 3:19am
I'm appreciative of your thoughts and comments, Wally. You are astute and keen in your understandings, I thank you for that, so very much.
Your visits are wholly awesome and I love reading your takeaways.... 👍🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
Your visits are wholly awesome and I love reading your takeaways.... 👍🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
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5th Jan 2021 7:07pm
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5th Jan 2021 7:09pm