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King Solomon’s Concubine (Book I)
Dark am I, yet lovely, daughters of Jerusalem, dark like the tents of Kedar, like the tent curtains of Solomon
Song of Solomon 1:5
Song of Solomon 1:5
Published 2nd Jan 2021
| Edited 8th Feb 2023
Author's Note
My next five poems will be based upon Solomon, the King of Israel, and a son of King David. His love letters are so inspiring, please forgive me if to your heart, mind, I do not captures its essence, but I will come as humanly close as possible.
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2nd Jan 2021 8:56pm
Wow my friend you got this mind all up in a roar heart pupping faster and faster forcing a bit of a rise to the lower south face beet red glasses fog over have A/C on high to cool the room from this blistering write
love it my friend
love it my friend
2nd Jan 2021 9:05pm
Well now.. what a beautiful sentiment as if Queen of Sheba was bowing to the sentiment of your soft love letter in merit. King Solomon was an amazing man, He had wives and concubines, yet God still kept him in favor. I will be bringing Queen of Sheba story into focus.. Thank you for reading and the soft touch of your whisper, enjoy your evening and the rest of your day
2nd Jan 2021 9:10pm
2nd Jan 2021 9:11pm
Please perfect your craft any means necessary and enjoy the vison of your beautiful mind my friend
2nd Jan 2021 9:38pm
If Solomon had as many concubines and wives as the Bible says, who can say he might not have indulged in threesomes (as far as it tells they came from pagan nations whose ways they brought into the Jewish king's life).
Thank you for reading my wise poet. In addition for the comment.
Yes King Solomon loved many foreign women in addition to Pharaoh’s daughter: Moabite, Ammonite, Edomite, Sidonian, and Hittite women. You must also remember God had told the Israelites about to not intermarry with them he had to refuse a treaty of such when the father wanted alliance for the King to marry their royal daughters.
He was forwarded, however, Solomon religion beliefs was blinded by him overtaking 700 wives who were all princesses and 300 concubines, the sad thought of his life is all these women turned his heart away from the Lord.
When it came down to it, it was the enticement, the physical engagement of the world which, aided in Solomon’s downfall, in addition, one must add love for women caused his heart to become divided.
I am quite sure Solomon still loved God, in as much, he loved women more than God and that caused him to sin against God. His words are evident in the Book of Proverbs, Ecclesiastes, and Song of Songs (Song of Solomon. I do believe he has some books in Psalms as well..
Yes King Solomon loved many foreign women in addition to Pharaoh’s daughter: Moabite, Ammonite, Edomite, Sidonian, and Hittite women. You must also remember God had told the Israelites about to not intermarry with them he had to refuse a treaty of such when the father wanted alliance for the King to marry their royal daughters.
He was forwarded, however, Solomon religion beliefs was blinded by him overtaking 700 wives who were all princesses and 300 concubines, the sad thought of his life is all these women turned his heart away from the Lord.
When it came down to it, it was the enticement, the physical engagement of the world which, aided in Solomon’s downfall, in addition, one must add love for women caused his heart to become divided.
I am quite sure Solomon still loved God, in as much, he loved women more than God and that caused him to sin against God. His words are evident in the Book of Proverbs, Ecclesiastes, and Song of Songs (Song of Solomon. I do believe he has some books in Psalms as well..
2nd Jan 2021 9:56pm
You are making roar loudly for you my Erotic Queen of Love. Keep on writing.
I will alway roar for you my handsome poet.. hopefully, you can hear my soft purrs through the realm of time, and thank you for reading and the awesome comment you provided. Please enjoy the remainder of your evening and I am bidding you a super duper Sunday in the making
3rd Jan 2021 00:51am
.....with such wisdom and spirituality, you speak the erotic voice of the Kings words. This is of your best. More than the lust and desires of thine concubine. There's is a kindred, an affinity.......a physical love. You capture this superbly. Mmmmm.....I am aroused, my apples are ripened
“Kiss me with the kisses of your mouth. Your expressions of love are better than wine.”
( “He lies between my breasts like a sachet of myrrh. He is like a bouquet of henna
The leaf-scattered ground will be our bed, the cedars will be the walls of our house and the cypress trees our rafters.
I delight to sit in his shade, and his fruit is sweet to my mouth. He leads me into a banquet cellar; his standard over me is love.”)
“Strengthen me with raisins and refresh me with apples, because I am lovesick
The curves of your thighs are like jewels. I will climb the palm tree, and take hold of its fruit. May your breasts be like clusters on the vine; may the fragrance of your breath be like apples)
#spirituallyravished #shadesofgrey
“Kiss me with the kisses of your mouth. Your expressions of love are better than wine.”
( “He lies between my breasts like a sachet of myrrh. He is like a bouquet of henna
The leaf-scattered ground will be our bed, the cedars will be the walls of our house and the cypress trees our rafters.
I delight to sit in his shade, and his fruit is sweet to my mouth. He leads me into a banquet cellar; his standard over me is love.”)
“Strengthen me with raisins and refresh me with apples, because I am lovesick
The curves of your thighs are like jewels. I will climb the palm tree, and take hold of its fruit. May your breasts be like clusters on the vine; may the fragrance of your breath be like apples)
#spirituallyravished #shadesofgrey
