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flawed

 
you desired the honesty of me
in reality it's painful
hidden deep even from me
it rises to the top as rage
when it devours I can do nothing
it will have its say
burning all in its way

blessed redeemer
you know the truth of me
where will I hide?

I wrestle with your decisions
my own way made
cast not dispersions
I am as created
a flawed creature

inside me I cry
I would that I be beautiful inside and out
so much hurt to be reconciled
I take it day by day

new revelations make my mind spin
new depth of character my thoughts changed
I seek the truth of me
yet I am afraid
 
 
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