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Obscured
Obscured and vague
Hidden in clouds
In a mist of gray
I'm lost
Strayed along the way
Lend a helping hand
Dampen this fire
That rages in my mind
Hidden in clouds
In a mist of gray
I'm lost
Strayed along the way
Lend a helping hand
Dampen this fire
That rages in my mind
Published 29th Dec 2020
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30th Dec 2020 3:01pm
30th Dec 2020 4:13pm
30th Dec 2020 4:14pm
Love the crispness of this ... great flow ... powerful in its brevity ...
30th Dec 2020 4:15pm
30th Dec 2020 5:08pm
Hi kaden Malis
I am an artist in adelaide australia.
Can I please use 2 of your poems and apply them to a drawing I have done?
I will share with you the final result
I am an artist in adelaide australia.
Can I please use 2 of your poems and apply them to a drawing I have done?
I will share with you the final result
31st Dec 2020 5:52pm
1st Jan 2021 1:00am
You can see the art work for this poem at instagram travislarbey26
Or Facebook Travis larbey (pinecone trav)
For some reason I cannot post pics on DU POETRY
Or Facebook Travis larbey (pinecone trav)
For some reason I cannot post pics on DU POETRY
15th Jan 2021 10:38am
A sentiment and a struggle that anybody with such issues can identify with. I thought it was written in a very concise and accessible way.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
16th Jan 2021 11:12am
2nd Mar 2021 4:19am
Lend a helping hand............ a cry for help...........DO seek to find someone who can lend a hand (though I know your feelings concerning those regular quacks...)
20th Jul 2021 10:43pm
20th Jul 2021 10:46pm
Than you must make up your mind and follow their guidance. You plunge....or you do not.
21st Jul 2021 3:37am
Then how come no one knocks if their so close?Its just keeping "honest"people honest.
