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I FEEL YOU IN THE WIND
As I stand on the deck,
looking across the valley
to the mountain peaks
wearing a blanket of snow;
I am thinking of YOU,
only you. The wind from the
NORTH feels sensual on
my longing face.
I close my eyes, hear
your voice, taste your lips.
Then, oh then, I realize
it is YOU.
You have come to me
in the wind. MY coldness
has become an inferno
of US.
PLEASE stay..blow stronger
if you desire.
looking across the valley
to the mountain peaks
wearing a blanket of snow;
I am thinking of YOU,
only you. The wind from the
NORTH feels sensual on
my longing face.
I close my eyes, hear
your voice, taste your lips.
Then, oh then, I realize
it is YOU.
You have come to me
in the wind. MY coldness
has become an inferno
of US.
PLEASE stay..blow stronger
if you desire.
Published 28th Dec 2020
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28th Dec 2020 5:28pm
Hello, I found this very clever, I can visualize the scene you’ve painted here.
write on Oralizer
Pen hug :)
Zazzles
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write on Oralizer
Pen hug :)
Zazzles
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28th Dec 2020 5:37pm
Thank you for your kind comment, it's encouraging. Have a "write" day and keep smiling. Hugs and peace, orl
Anonymous
28th Dec 2020 6:35pm
It's a beautiful sentiment, Oral
Zazzles is right, that you've painted a picturesque scene with your words that's captivating and so easy to visualize.
I enjoyed reading this very much
💜
xo
Zazzles is right, that you've painted a picturesque scene with your words that's captivating and so easy to visualize.
I enjoyed reading this very much
💜
xo
28th Dec 2020 6:39pm
Thank you, my dear Princess, Changing gears for a while...so many ideas to write about. Hugs and kisses, oral
