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You Died In Explosion

A tender smile on a strong face  
with a cheekbone so acute
Are you reconsidering your ways,  
now that the past weighs down your route?  
  
An Elve has a tender heart,  
beauty and fine scenery define him,  
even when pride burns as art,  
and corrupts his intentions within.  
   
I like it, how innocence blushes  
healing your cheeks of a child;  
I want to return home, it pushes  
me, and I go desperately wild....  
   
Have you ever abandoned a woman?  
A wife even, that bore you kids?  
Did you swear an oath to your adolescent men,  
your kin - destroyed - purity it needs.  
   
Maglor sings at the seaside  
And let him be gifted with God power;  
actually God's power does hide  
inside each soul that unleashes; the hour  
   
has come. Oh, Elbereth!  
Let Manwe's Light protect our Faith!  
Our bravery always lets  
Lack of disbelief to stand its grace...!  
   
Once Sauron sung to incite  
disrespect of the Almighty Power  
Holy and Tender inside,  
The Light Throne Naive is Not; Our  
   
Lord that knows Mercy and Forgiveness.  
We shouldn't feel guilty or let go of our way  
to instill purity and respect as to witness  
how every starlight becomes brighter each day...  
   
Feanor, oh Crafter!  
You talented with wisdom Royalty!  
Unleash your childish laughter  
remember the origin of loyalty!  
   
As there is One Rule to Keep them All  
One Rule for Each Elve that Exists  
Never Betray a Brother of Kin, as it shall enthral  
synchrony to become disenchantingly forgetful of remiss....  
   
Love me under the starry night  
on snow as white and shiny as your soul  
Let your Fire become Pure Light...  
May your Eyes never get Low!  
   
Not Low as an earthquake  
or the witchhouse sounds of Creation  
But it is said that you shall wake,  
regain your Aristocracy through new chelation...  
   
If I could give you a gift  
I would draw a card of remembrance  
for the ships you've drowned so swift,  
believing in the Purity of Silmarils without ascendance...  
   
You believed that Varda did protect them?  
Yes, she did - she put a shield  
But their Souls communicate with you and then  
from inside they your emanations wield....  
   
So much desecration,  
So much sorrow and pain...  
Could it be that damnation  
leaked inside from their inner domain?  
   
So I will crown you now, you firstborn Son!  
Of Finwe's House, a genius;  
Let them be purified with your tears pouring down...  
Glass pigmented soul selenius!  
   
I will sing in Noldor speech  
let it tenderly affect my mouth  
so it can naturally come out as to teach  
   
us of the New Ways that are so Explosively Couth!  
   
I heard you ended your life path  
by explosion so abruptive and demonstrative  
Let generations sing of Feanor's loving Wrath!  
   
For your eternal choices I deeply Grieve!  
   
Oh Elvenson, you are a Legend  
and Today - I wonder where you are  
I just know you decipher it all, but vengeance  
is an equal of War.  
   
Ascend, my Love!  
And remember the Queen's bidding  
NEVER hurt your Kin of Dove!  
But it shall not be a law forbidding...  
It shall be a feeling from within and above...  
   
While we dance, we started swirling  
and the Sky got lost in our Dreams  
So Creation exquisitely twirling  
shall create Silmaril Moonbeams...  
   
Aia María quanta Eruanno  
Hail Mary, full of grace  
   
i Héru aselyë  
the Lord is with thee  
   
aistana elyë imíca nísi  
blessed art thou amongst women  
   
ar aistana i yávë mónalyo Yésus.  
and blessed is the fruit of thy womb Jesus.  
   
Airë María Eruo ontaril  
Holy Mary, Mother of God  
   
á hyamë rámen úcarindor  
pray for us sinners  
   
sí ar lúmessë ya firuvammë: násië.  
now and at the hour of our death: Amen!
Written by AaronBraveHeart (Boyana Popova)
Published | Edited 18th Sep 2022
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