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dear husband
I want to thank you for always loving me true
inside the storms, you are a light
sadness comes, my tears are diamonds around your neck
you say I'm never more beautiful than when I cry
you bring me close and whisper you'll never face the world alone
sometimes I take you for granted
as the day to day overtakes us
it's in the still moments watching you in action I'm reminded
like a soldier, at his post, you are someone I can count on
fearlessly facing my demons, a warrior soul
it's in my quiet times you amaze me
you deserve a medal of honor
this sentiment would make you grow shy
you don't see yourself in this light
warrior spirit marching with me on this journey of discovery
beating back the dark that threatens to cross my soul
in the shadow of death I will fear no evil
I love you, dear husband
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Re. dear husband
27th Dec 2020 4:05pm
I absolutely love this tribute to love!!!!! ..... ''my tears are diamonds around your neck
you say I'm never more beautiful than when I cry''.... vulnerability makes a woman beautiful and is treasured (like diamonds) by any man. It warms my heart to feel the beautiful emotions so eloquently portrayed in this extraordinary write , AGAIN!!! Beautiful!
you say I'm never more beautiful than when I cry''.... vulnerability makes a woman beautiful and is treasured (like diamonds) by any man. It warms my heart to feel the beautiful emotions so eloquently portrayed in this extraordinary write , AGAIN!!! Beautiful!
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Re: Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 1:42pm
good morning dearest poet I'm certainly a handful at times I know that sounds funny but it's true I'm grateful for him...he's not perfect but sometimes I forget the beautiful parts of him... thank you for leaving such a beautifully thoughtful comment 💕
Re. dear husband
27th Dec 2020 5:26pm
What a beautiful tribute and homage this is what real and rare love feels like and looks like through the eyes of LOVE BETWEEN A WOMAN AND A MAN respect dear poetess 😇😁🤗
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Re: Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 1:43pm
thank you dearest Stoney for the love on this write he is good to me it feels good to remember that in my poetry...I deeply appreciate your thoughts here 💕
Re: Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 3:32pm
Respect Dear Poetess it is that kind of genuine and unconditional love that is rare and real with a equal balance of exchange 😍
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Re. dear husband
27th Dec 2020 5:27pm
Re: Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 1:44pm
Re: Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 1:46pm
good morning dearest Poet it feels good to remember the best of him when I start to be ungrateful for a beautiful life I've had it hard in times past... I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤
Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 00:57am
"My tears are diamonds around your neck." That says it all. So well done, crimsin.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 1:46pm
Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 7:00am
Dear B,
Reading this lovely homage forced me to look inward and take stock in the good of what I have. I am always in awe when I’ve been moved that much by a poem. The beauty of this write extends far and wide. Lovely. H🌷
Reading this lovely homage forced me to look inward and take stock in the good of what I have. I am always in awe when I’ve been moved that much by a poem. The beauty of this write extends far and wide. Lovely. H🌷
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Re: Re. dear husband
28th Dec 2020 1:48pm
good morning beautiful Honoria it warms me to know this poem moved you so much thank you for the love on this write it's deeply felt 🌹
Re. dear husband
29th Dec 2020 3:46am
Rip my heart out sister
You're husband is truly blessed to have you
Your appreciation expressed here is priceless
The role of friend partner caregiver support lover is trying and for you to recognize that is damn beautiful
You're husband is truly blessed to have you
Your appreciation expressed here is priceless
The role of friend partner caregiver support lover is trying and for you to recognize that is damn beautiful
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Re: Re. dear husband
30th Dec 2020 3:03am
thank you beautiful Valeriya for the love on this write no doubt I feel blessed to have him in my life he's very giving person I do my best to let him know he is loved but sometimes I fall short...I deeply appreciate your thoughts here 💕
Re. dear husband
30th Dec 2020 00:53am
Wonderful, emotionally charged and honest. It's truly awe-inspiring, the way you open up to the world and give us a glimpse into the love you feel. Relationships take a lot of work, they're not perfect, but the work we all put in have so many rewards.
Thank you for sharing Brenda, you both are luck to be in each other's lives.
Thank you for sharing Brenda, you both are luck to be in each other's lives.
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Re: Re. dear husband
30th Dec 2020 3:06am
good evening dearest Wally yes relationships are commitment it's hard sometimes but beautiful as well I feel fortunate he loves me as is which is not always easy to do...I deeply appreciate your thoughts here thank you ❤
Re. dear husband
Anonymous
13th Jan 2021 2:02am
Hey Crim......I too forget the luv around me.......keep hanging onto a luv long gone.......blessed to have read this........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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