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A Gasp in Time - rededication
do you remember
it was a stop in a minute
designated randomly by time
a pause, like a slowed clock
the heart skipped a little
witnessing a perfection
in that small tick
it was a gasp
a little stumble
a slow growing ripple
and a euphoria
starting from the centre
encompassing the surrounding space
a writing on the wall
a graffiti, etched there
adorning a pulse
that would go on for a while
adoring that perfection
an honesty in the words
I love You.
"Truths...in these times of today its so shocking when the simplicity of a truth can be perceived and interpreted simply as.
It takes You through the euphoria of actual realization ....one that at first the skeptic reads as blurred becomes crystal -and there is the magic we seek to Life!!!
Beautiful Gasp Dear Grace-Simplicity made grand by all its many layers."
Published 1st Aug 2014
it was a stop in a minute
designated randomly by time
a pause, like a slowed clock
the heart skipped a little
witnessing a perfection
in that small tick
it was a gasp
a little stumble
a slow growing ripple
and a euphoria
starting from the centre
encompassing the surrounding space
a writing on the wall
a graffiti, etched there
adorning a pulse
that would go on for a while
adoring that perfection
an honesty in the words
I love You.
"Truths...in these times of today its so shocking when the simplicity of a truth can be perceived and interpreted simply as.
It takes You through the euphoria of actual realization ....one that at first the skeptic reads as blurred becomes crystal -and there is the magic we seek to Life!!!
Beautiful Gasp Dear Grace-Simplicity made grand by all its many layers."
Published 1st Aug 2014
Published 26th Dec 2020
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NoPoo
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- Edited 26th Dec 2020 6:10pm
26th Dec 2020 4:58pm
Beautiful and heart warming. I love reading his words, Grace. I didn't know Gabe but I feel like I am slowly becoming familiar, through you. I hope that's ok. I feel this connection via the #NoPoo thread and I just swear, If I hadn't joined DU so late, I just know we would have probably been friends. I mean my love of Metallica alone!!... lol... I think my finding your poetry via #NoPoo and not knowing who you where previously, wasn't an accident. At least those are my cosmic feelings....Loss is difficult for people to comprehend (if they've never experienced it before), especially as time passes, I understand the need for sharing his words and truly appreciate seeing them through your eyes. So, I thank you, humbly for sharing.
Much love,
🌹
B
Much love,
🌹
B
26th Dec 2020 11:44pm
It was meant to be. The Baltimore Airport saw shadows of wishes of hugs and kisses and forever afters.🌹thank you for your indepth understanding.
27th Dec 2020 2:06am
Thank you for warming up my heart with this poem. Keep on writing. At least you got to know him, for he's in your heart forever.
28th Dec 2020 1:06pm
27th Dec 2020 10:43pm
28th Dec 2020 1:06pm
2nd Jan 2021 8:53pm
*hugs* Happy New Year sweetheart. May you look back in gratitude on another year of life and look ahead with hope.
