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PICKUP LINE

Is that a pickup
line I wonder, eager for
amplification

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 24th Dec 2020

#music #senryu

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Re. PICKUP LINE

Anonymous

24th Dec 2020 8:30pm

I gave up on those things a long time ago. I just show my face now. That's good enough. haha

24th Dec 2020 8:39pm

The case made for this
one is strong, and soft inside�
accommodating

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Re. PICKUP LINE

25th Dec 2020 7:51pm

Ha! I think anything could become a pickup line depending on how you said it and the circumstances!

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