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dreams in recompense.
I woke up hours before the alarm,
forgetting, for just a few drowsy seconds,
left in a haze—
only a dream's kind of stillness,
a foggy, jumbled emotional bliss
I swear
I found you there,... waiting
with arms outstretched in recompense;
Instantly my skin ached to bone with brutal need,
despite knowing far better, when in usual awake;
It was only you and me and all our torched
greed;
Your mouth left quiet,
cursed by my own mind's thieve
I have never known desire more
than so lost in those seconds...
... rendering you in complete.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 22nd Dec 2020
Author's Note
©Blu2020
before coffee hits the bloodstream
#NoPoo
pic: From Toni Pindak, Peaceful Dreams by Josephine Wall via Pinterest
before coffee hits the bloodstream
#NoPoo
pic: From Toni Pindak, Peaceful Dreams by Josephine Wall via Pinterest
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Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 9:43pm
Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 11:20pm
Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 10:08pm
Oh my Princess, as usual, you have hit another high note in your poetry. Thanks for sharing and never leave us. Hugs and peace. oral
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 10:14pm
Thank you, Oral
I'm hanging in there so far..
Much thanks for reading and
your thoughtful comments
🌈
I'm hanging in there so far..
Much thanks for reading and
your thoughtful comments
🌈
Anonymous
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22nd Dec 2020 10:25pm
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 11:23pm
Thank you Tim!
I wrote this early this morning and held onto to it because I'm not exactly thrilled, but I made a promise to myself to post everything I write, for good or bad, until the end of the year... So,here it is.
I'm appreciative of your comments and list add
I enjoy seeing you on my page.
💜
xoxo
B
I wrote this early this morning and held onto to it because I'm not exactly thrilled, but I made a promise to myself to post everything I write, for good or bad, until the end of the year... So,here it is.
I'm appreciative of your comments and list add
I enjoy seeing you on my page.
💜
xoxo
B
Anonymous
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22nd Dec 2020 11:26pm
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Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 10:51pm
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22nd Dec 2020 10:59pm
Awww... felt that deeply, Grace
hugs.
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
-Susan
hugs.
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
-Susan
Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
23rd Dec 2020 6:21am
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22nd Dec 2020 10:53pm
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 11:24pm
Ty so much for reading and yes a whopper!
💜
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
B
💜
Season's Greetings to you and yours
❄ ☃️ ❄️
xo
B
Re. dreams in recompense.
22nd Dec 2020 10:57pm
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Re. dreams in recompense.
23rd Dec 2020 1:46am
BV, this is another beautiful passionate write. You have me in a trance floating through every magical word of this dreamy poem. I adore your passion in poetry. Living the dream with this amazing romantic mind trip. Captivating !!!
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
23rd Dec 2020 2:33am
Thank you, FF
Captivating... he says...
I love that word.
.. gratitude for reading
and list add
xoxo
🌹
B
Captivating... he says...
I love that word.
.. gratitude for reading
and list add
xoxo
🌹
B
Re. dreams in recompense.
23rd Dec 2020 7:40am
Dear BV,
Those dreamscapes are the best. Why do I want to say “I’ll have what she’s having.” ? Is that inappropriate? That’s probably inappropriate. I like your promise to post everything you write. I want to do that too. Except I find by the time I sign on to write and post I’ve forgotten every word of whatever mediocrity I was going to share. 😏
Wonderfully written and filled to the brim with great sensitivity. Plus I love the font. Is that an option I’ve overlooked? So many more things to learn. Super write.
H🌷
Those dreamscapes are the best. Why do I want to say “I’ll have what she’s having.” ? Is that inappropriate? That’s probably inappropriate. I like your promise to post everything you write. I want to do that too. Except I find by the time I sign on to write and post I’ve forgotten every word of whatever mediocrity I was going to share. 😏
Wonderfully written and filled to the brim with great sensitivity. Plus I love the font. Is that an option I’ve overlooked? So many more things to learn. Super write.
H🌷
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
23rd Dec 2020 1:51pm
Dearest H,.
The font is to use the Times New Roman font and then select your entire poem and italicize your whole poem... and viola!.. you're good to go.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE..~ "I'll have what she's having" It's not inappropriate on my page, not ever.....
hahaha... and what a great compliment.
I thank you for the giggle and your thoughtful comments, I'm so glad you enjoyed it
Thank you muchly,
🌹
xo
The font is to use the Times New Roman font and then select your entire poem and italicize your whole poem... and viola!.. you're good to go.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE..~ "I'll have what she's having" It's not inappropriate on my page, not ever.....
hahaha... and what a great compliment.
I thank you for the giggle and your thoughtful comments, I'm so glad you enjoyed it
Thank you muchly,
🌹
xo
Re. dreams in recompense.
23rd Dec 2020 7:50am
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23rd Dec 2020 10:19am
Re. dreams in recompense.
23rd Dec 2020 7:23pm
These words of dream hold the devine within... 🔥🌹... a dreams desire to manifest... this is angelic in origin and in scripture... so mote it be
Miss blue... majestic and vivid... your always beautiful poetic words...💙
Miss blue... majestic and vivid... your always beautiful poetic words...💙
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
28th Dec 2020 12:07pm
Eli,
Thank you. How else do I convey what I an feeling after reading (much too late, sorry) your lovely comments??!! I am deeply appreciative of all your support and constant friendship. I hope you are aware of that.
Ty Ty
Damn, I am extremely lucky
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Thank you. How else do I convey what I an feeling after reading (much too late, sorry) your lovely comments??!! I am deeply appreciative of all your support and constant friendship. I hope you are aware of that.
Ty Ty
Damn, I am extremely lucky
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. dreams in recompense.
24th Dec 2020 5:57am
It's like a moment clarity, somewhere between sleep and being fully awake when those thoughts reach you. You captured so well and delivered it flawlessly.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
28th Dec 2020 12:08pm
You are so astute Wally!
That's it exactly..
Thank you so much for reading and understanding
xoxo
💜
That's it exactly..
Thank you so much for reading and understanding
xoxo
💜
Re. dreams in recompense.
25th Dec 2020 11:54pm
Well written.
Little by little, the verses create a perfect atmosphere.
... ...
(Merry Christmas and Happy New Year)
Little by little, the verses create a perfect atmosphere.
... ...
(Merry Christmas and Happy New Year)
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Re: Re. dreams in recompense.
25th Dec 2020 11:58pm
Thank you for reading and your lovely insights.
Merry Christmas to you and yours and very happy new year wishes for 2021.
X
-B
Merry Christmas to you and yours and very happy new year wishes for 2021.
X
-B
Re. dreams in recompense.
Confirmation of your vivid imagination. Ah, to watch you sleep and stir; the angst and need when you awaken.
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