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shy girl
in aching innocence, you found me
shy but willing to explore
my body a mystery with locks your kisses picked
you were my first love
with hesitant eyes, I look at you sure in your mission
my childhood forgotten while in your arms
laid by the waste side with my dollies was my resolve
I could no longer deny you
I could no longer deny myself
honey-kissed sin
succumbing to temptation's bliss
when you pushed into my womanhood
opening the doors to Nirvana
a shy girl tentative in love
an initiate of lust to become
Published 21st Dec 2020
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21st Dec 2020 9:34pm
21st Dec 2020 10:10pm
thank you graciously dearest Ron for the love on this write Poet inspired me or rather reminiscing did 🌹
21st Dec 2020 10:11pm
21st Dec 2020 10:10pm
21st Dec 2020 10:16pm
21st Dec 2020 10:18pm
You are such a writer, writing on so many different levels and topics, Freaking tight Lady
22nd Dec 2020 00:28am
22nd Dec 2020 00:20am
Crimson this is such a graceful beautifully written erotic wonderment. I lust for your pure poetry!!! Splendid write!
22nd Dec 2020 00:29am
good evening dearest poet thank you most graciously for the love on this write ❤
22nd Dec 2020 7:47am
Enjoyable read of a girl's first taste of sexual love. Favourite verse:
with hesitant eyes, I look at you sure in your mission
my childhood forgotten while in your arms
laid by the waste side with my dollies was my resolve
I could no longer deny you
I could no longer deny myself
Also enjoyed this line, for description of her opening up:
my body a mystery with locks your kisses picked
with hesitant eyes, I look at you sure in your mission
my childhood forgotten while in your arms
laid by the waste side with my dollies was my resolve
I could no longer deny you
I could no longer deny myself
Also enjoyed this line, for description of her opening up:
my body a mystery with locks your kisses picked
Merry Christmas Solomon...thank you dearest for the love on this write it's deeply appreciated ❤
23rd Dec 2020 3:00am
The first time is always remembered
If this first experience is what opened the door to the ink that now flows sensually from your pen and erotically to my ears then I also thank your first lover
If this first experience is what opened the door to the ink that now flows sensually from your pen and erotically to my ears then I also thank your first lover
25th Dec 2020 5:19pm
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24th Dec 2020 4:31am
The emergence of young love gives way a truly stunning write. The experience and emotions transform us into more sexual beings, understanding our lust and needs.
Great stuff!
Great stuff!
25th Dec 2020 5:22pm
good morning dearest Wally have a beautiful Christmas... thank you for sharing your thoughts on this write I deeply appreciate you 💕
