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I SURRENDER (A LA BCPOET)

I surrender
to the tender
burning ember
of your member
 
now approaching
for the broaching
of womanhood
by your manhood
 
stiffness brushing,
lips now flushing
my fingers guide
your swollen pride
 
as your body,
total noddy,
moves over me,
embracingly.
 
your hands straying,
on breasts playing,
on curves sliding.
legs dividing
 
as you enter
the wet center
of my being,
virtue fleeing.
 
I am winding
my legs, binding
you so firmly,
can't escape me
 
my nails tearing,
your love swearing
as with ardour
you thrust harder
 
set bed rocking,
headboard knocking,
hearts are pounding,
moans are sounding

your thrusts I meet
with rising beat,
pubes impacting,
walls contracting

hearts are drumming
'I am coming'
sounds, we arch backs
for the climax
 
your exploding,
seed unloading
in the channel
of my canal
 
 
 
Written by Solomon_Song
Published
Author's Note
Another try with the rhythms much used by bcpoet,
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