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Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
Blink, and an adult
A childhood fast-forwarded
Nostalgia's peek back
Author's Note
For December Senryu Theme: Childhood
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©Blu2020
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©Blu2020
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Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 3:08am
Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
Only for the December Haiku Theme via the haiku pond... that's it.
I'm not sure it's my cup of tea, but you have definitely rubbed off on me. I think I've read a zillion... lol 😂 I love them now, I'm just not at your level... by far.
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xoxo
B
I'm not sure it's my cup of tea, but you have definitely rubbed off on me. I think I've read a zillion... lol 😂 I love them now, I'm just not at your level... by far.
💜
xoxo
B
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 3:55am
Bravissima, Blue❣❣ Pictures make me smile big, especially Captain Kangaroo 😄 i was more a fan of Mr. Green Jeans 🤠 Remember the pingpong ball? Cute pic of you 😍 there's sobering truth in this one
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 4:08am
Loved Mr Green jeans!!
lol..the dump of the ping pong balls over the head... 😂 😂
Ty for reading, Bob
I'm glad you enjoyed and it resonated
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xo
B
lol..the dump of the ping pong balls over the head... 😂 😂
Ty for reading, Bob
I'm glad you enjoyed and it resonated
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 4:22am
Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 4:35am
Lol... That's not me
It's a little girl getting a perm
They were torture but my mom started letting us perm our own hair in middle school and that's exactly what I looked like my first time... hahaha...
But those curlers you sleep in were a nightmare, too.... ugggh.
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hahaha
It's a little girl getting a perm
They were torture but my mom started letting us perm our own hair in middle school and that's exactly what I looked like my first time... hahaha...
But those curlers you sleep in were a nightmare, too.... ugggh.
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hahaha
Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
I saw the high cheek bones...thought it was you. I have seen 5 sisters so I've every big hair tons of makeup look. 😍
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 9:10am
Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 9:48pm
Yes, ma'am 😍 When getting ready on a school morning, I'd just roll out bed and get myself dressed because there was no chance in hell I was getting into the kids bathroom. And the fights were legendary...WHO USED MY CURLING IRON? Is that my dress...take it off now, etc. etc.
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
lol... I bet
Ty for reading, Tim
I'm so very glad you enjoyed it
I'm grateful for your RL add 🙏 🌹
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xoxo
B
Ty for reading, Tim
I'm so very glad you enjoyed it
I'm grateful for your RL add 🙏 🌹
💜
xoxo
B
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 7:41am
I think I'm very much still the kid I was. Though I can appreciate it more as an adult.
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
I can feel that sentiment, exactly! Somedays, I wish to be that kid for just a few days... lol.. carefree.
Ty for reading, the list add and your lovely comment
💜🌹💜
xoxo
B
Ty for reading, the list add and your lovely comment
💜🌹💜
xoxo
B
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 8:40am
Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 8:41am
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 9:01am
Dear BV,
Nope! Every single picture! Love them. Adorable concept! I was just transported immediately back in time to my childhood except my banana seat bike was pink with pink streamers hanging from the handle bars. Your poem is wonderful, it truly is the blink of an eye when childhood is but this nostalgic memory of soft smiles or hysterical laughter at the fashions. Great write. H🌷
Nope! Every single picture! Love them. Adorable concept! I was just transported immediately back in time to my childhood except my banana seat bike was pink with pink streamers hanging from the handle bars. Your poem is wonderful, it truly is the blink of an eye when childhood is but this nostalgic memory of soft smiles or hysterical laughter at the fashions. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
Ohh H,
What lovely comments!!
It's just what I hoped to covey and I'm so happy that's how it resonated with you! Yess!
Those banana seat bikes with the handlebar steamers and baskets... I had that white plastic wicker type basket with 70's multicolor'd flowers on it!!I, too.. Every time I see them, I'm transported back. It WAS my childhood. That bike was a sense of freedom and adulthood. The kid version of having a car... We would ride our bikes ALL DAY! Going places we definitely weren't supposed to.... hahaha... My banana seat bike, definitely had stories to tell..... 😉
Ty for sharing your thoughts, adding me to your list and your thoughtfulness, H
I'm always so happy to see/read your insights on my page
🚲 💜 🌹💜🚲
xoxo
B
What lovely comments!!
It's just what I hoped to covey and I'm so happy that's how it resonated with you! Yess!
Those banana seat bikes with the handlebar steamers and baskets... I had that white plastic wicker type basket with 70's multicolor'd flowers on it!!I, too.. Every time I see them, I'm transported back. It WAS my childhood. That bike was a sense of freedom and adulthood. The kid version of having a car... We would ride our bikes ALL DAY! Going places we definitely weren't supposed to.... hahaha... My banana seat bike, definitely had stories to tell..... 😉
Ty for sharing your thoughts, adding me to your list and your thoughtfulness, H
I'm always so happy to see/read your insights on my page
🚲 💜 🌹💜🚲
xoxo
B
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 11:20am
Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 9:23pm
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 12:01pm
I love this nostalgic presentation. It makes me smile! There is nothing like a reminder of those childhood moments that we took for granted until we blink and they become our cherished memories. This beautiful submission is like a time machine to the joys of yesteryear. Fantastic!
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 9:28pm
Your smile and thoughtful feedback are appreciated and for being a little senryś, I'm glad my write brought a little bit of joy.
Ty so much for reading and your comments
Your visits always me smile as well.
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xo
B
Ty so much for reading and your comments
Your visits always me smile as well.
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 9:20pm
Its flying by so so quick... but without the experiences of a little age .. we wouldn't ever have gotten to experienceone of lifes most dangerous backyard games... "Lawn Darts!!!" Nice little composition miss blue...⚘ I also love to reminisce
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
15th Dec 2020 9:25pm
Those lawn darts were dangerous af! lol... Hee hee hee They were a blast, too.
I'm glad you enjoyed this little idea of a look back...
I appreciate you, so.. Eli.. you are so supportive and encouraging. I'm so fucking lucky.
Ty for the RL add and your always, awesome comments.
💜
xoxo
B
I'm glad you enjoyed this little idea of a look back...
I appreciate you, so.. Eli.. you are so supportive and encouraging. I'm so fucking lucky.
Ty for the RL add and your always, awesome comments.
💜
xoxo
B
Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
18th Dec 2020 11:36pm
Stunning visual Blue. It's like you say, blink and the we wonder where the time went. The years are really compacted in our memory, beautiful and nostalgic.
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Re: Re. Blue's peek back (A Senryś)
18th Dec 2020 11:38pm
I had so much fun... Pinterest is a true treasure trove! Ty for reading and the list add, Wally
It really does go by in the blink of an eye... doesn't it.
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xo
B
It really does go by in the blink of an eye... doesn't it.
🌹
xo
B