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Freedom Is Admission (NoPoo 33)
Admit it
Submission
Sounds
An exciting prospect
Giving all
Every thought
Each breath
Those quickening
Heartbeats
Of anticipation
Tremoring
Naked skin
A little fear
Of losing it
Completely
You secretly
Want it
Need it
A recurring fantasy
That constantly plays
An urgency
Keeps it
Flowing inside
Like a fire
Never extinguished
It sears
Soars
The naughty in you
Wants to be
Totally coveted
Submission
Sounds
An exciting prospect
Giving all
Every thought
Each breath
Those quickening
Heartbeats
Of anticipation
Tremoring
Naked skin
A little fear
Of losing it
Completely
You secretly
Want it
Need it
A recurring fantasy
That constantly plays
An urgency
Keeps it
Flowing inside
Like a fire
Never extinguished
It sears
Soars
The naughty in you
Wants to be
Totally coveted
Published 14th Dec 2020
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For the thread NoPoo 33 of 365
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2020 3:44pm
Ummm..... whew... (that's a sexy "whew")
I'm very MUCH loving this spill, C
It's an insightful, succinctly put, peek inside a longing and yearn filled submissive desire.
Of course my heart beats faster...
Ty for sharing 💜
xoxo
B
I'm very MUCH loving this spill, C
It's an insightful, succinctly put, peek inside a longing and yearn filled submissive desire.
Of course my heart beats faster...
Ty for sharing 💜
xoxo
B
14th Dec 2020 3:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Dec 2020 5:00pm
14th Dec 2020 4:59pm
cheeky!
(love it!)
(love it!)
28th Jan 2022 6:48pm
Wonderful insight:
It is often difficult to admit what we need the most.
Great spill!
🙏
It is often difficult to admit what we need the most.
Great spill!
🙏
29th Jan 2022 4:06pm
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