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Don't make me laugh
Don't make me laugh
You call yourself a Master, because you had her on her knees, because you tied her with a rope, because she said "yes please".
Yes you may have handcuffs, and all the toys on show, but I know you are plastic, a pretender on the go
Oh you got safe words, well you even own a rack, got yourself a Flogger, to smack her on the back
Ooh you got a ball gag, blindfold and loads of ropes and ties, where is your camera to record your bullshit lies
I'll tell you why you are fake, you have no feeling for your sub, no respect, no protection, you're a nasty little grub
Because you give them no respect, you must give them aftercare and love, be there to listen to them, not just rule with a iron glove
A real dom is caring, he takes pride in the life he leads, proud to be a real Master, who proves it by his deeds
So put away the toy box, go learn first to be a man, learn to care and learn to love, I really hope you can
Forget the Dom label, real subs just watch and laugh, just be nice and you will grow so please don't be so daft
One day you might be a Dom, find a Sub to call you Master, just pretending you are all these things, wont help you find them faster
Ron
You call yourself a Master, because you had her on her knees, because you tied her with a rope, because she said "yes please".
Yes you may have handcuffs, and all the toys on show, but I know you are plastic, a pretender on the go
Oh you got safe words, well you even own a rack, got yourself a Flogger, to smack her on the back
Ooh you got a ball gag, blindfold and loads of ropes and ties, where is your camera to record your bullshit lies
I'll tell you why you are fake, you have no feeling for your sub, no respect, no protection, you're a nasty little grub
Because you give them no respect, you must give them aftercare and love, be there to listen to them, not just rule with a iron glove
A real dom is caring, he takes pride in the life he leads, proud to be a real Master, who proves it by his deeds
So put away the toy box, go learn first to be a man, learn to care and learn to love, I really hope you can
Forget the Dom label, real subs just watch and laugh, just be nice and you will grow so please don't be so daft
One day you might be a Dom, find a Sub to call you Master, just pretending you are all these things, wont help you find them faster
Ron
Published 14th Dec 2020
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2020 4:50pm
You're spot on.
Respect and mutual understanding, first and foremost. A faux Dom is dangerous and just despicable, really. Care and caution need to be taken by any potential submissive, that's for sure
Ty for sharing.. xoxo
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Respect and mutual understanding, first and foremost. A faux Dom is dangerous and just despicable, really. Care and caution need to be taken by any potential submissive, that's for sure
Ty for sharing.. xoxo
💜 💜 💜
14th Dec 2020 4:55pm
I was reading stuff about Subs being mistreated and ghosted by wanna be Doms
So you know me a poem sprang to mind
Thanks beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
So you know me a poem sprang to mind
Thanks beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
