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~pythagorean geometries & poetic pyrethrums
magnetic~ hypotenuses
are your slanting clear rays
in straight pencilling lines
of drawing red sunsets
a magmatic Fuji’s foundry
of molten Iron ore streams
in a boldening suffusion-
an arterial RBC gush
of an electric branching
lightning verve, is
this effervesce flaming
rush of a cavernous resonance
- traverses as curvy~ sinuous
wave in coppery flush~ burn:
a monstrously tendrilous
climbing specie of a
spirited warrior spree
in penetrance (nulling those
thickly choking white smoke
in a ro(o/u)ted wide-open
unshackle display crawl
of fair palmar silences. .
from smoggy noxious
closing in weedy wildfire
of a cryptic dusky haze)
hitting home... this
waiting~ weighing down
virtuous gravity core
of my earthen grounds
in a crying~ clamour
..of an unclassifiable
painpleasure crisis... as you
unbundle your each discrete
quantum pack of leaping~
olympic photonic sunbirds
of a lambent lightness
unto this cracky~ crusted
benumbed & barren famine
heart... of a dreary dreamless
desertion...
in a raging revolution...
busts those tented clustery
clogger headed politi-co-rporate
invasive dusts.. corruptibly
in slavish stamps of a pre(-)datedly
manufactured expiry of the soil...
to a grainy anew
'now'... the
naturally browning~
organic- a seedy staging
non-puppetary spread
of unitary freedom
-in an epic
reformatory status, wets
viscously the clay.. as
One undifferentiable pool~
setting in.. a forever
fidelity
of Us, in
an equatorial poetic rainfall
of our in & out
wordy breaths... & beyond
Published 12th Dec 2020
Author's Note
#115 ERULGCT .Rob, Love Ev xx
Also #NoPoo/ 12122020/23:30:56
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Also #NoPoo/ 12122020/23:30:56
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12th Dec 2020 9:14pm
The observer creates the observed, and your observations have created the sublime.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
12th Dec 2020 9:22pm
Lol. I always thought Isosceles was a Turkish footballer. Cleverdom use of angles doo, Love me xx
13th Dec 2020 6:05pm
13th Dec 2020 6:35pm
Puriyaarathu puriyaama irukkaathu
Puriyaathathu puriyaama thaan irukkum..
Rajni dialogue madhiri illa?
Hehe. Dunn strain & stress ur brain if you cant lol
Puriyaathathu puriyaama thaan irukkum..
Rajni dialogue madhiri illa?
Hehe. Dunn strain & stress ur brain if you cant lol
13th Dec 2020 7:05pm
13th Dec 2020 7:47pm
15th Dec 2020 7:24pm
This hurts my heart and seems the deep awareness of someone who is experiencing everything in this vacuum of longing, but perhaps I am just projecting, which is unavoidable. Beautiful use of geometrics and geologics, light and the cycles of the world. You are amazing.
17th Dec 2020 9:05pm
I find your poems hard to critique because your use of language is so idiosyncratic. There seems to be a lack of complete sentences or cogent ideas that you can pluck out and analyse, it’s all just a strange explosion of bizarre alternating font choices, weird punctuation, and random images. It’s chaotic and incoherent, but never boring. It has a Dada quality. I enjoy stumbling across fierce little images or phrasings that just work, against logic, on some level.
