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The Bluest Beast
do those words
just fall that way?
a perfect spill,
an earnest spatter,
the wound
ripped open
again,
jagged and bleeding,
the dark
a vacuous hole in a broken heart,
the poem
some kind of scattershot
prayer to indifferent gods
or a sonic scream
whispered across the page
just fall that way?
a perfect spill,
an earnest spatter,
the wound
ripped open
again,
jagged and bleeding,
the dark
a vacuous hole in a broken heart,
the poem
some kind of scattershot
prayer to indifferent gods
or a sonic scream
whispered across the page
Published 11th Dec 2020
Author's Note
Written as a tribute to one of my favorite DU poets.
Her organic poetry.
Her organic poetry.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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11th Dec 2020 2:27pm
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12th Dec 2020 1:58pm
A gorgeously written spill of admiration.
You succinctly convey such a heartfelt connection you seem to take away from this lucky poetess' poems. What a compliment! As always, your own penned words are stuck in my mind, as I mull them over in thought. To me, that's where greatness lies.
Ty for sharing this beauty
(she's one of my favorites too)
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
You succinctly convey such a heartfelt connection you seem to take away from this lucky poetess' poems. What a compliment! As always, your own penned words are stuck in my mind, as I mull them over in thought. To me, that's where greatness lies.
Ty for sharing this beauty
(she's one of my favorites too)
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
12th Dec 2020 2:02pm
11th Dec 2020 7:04pm
Oh gosh, javalini, I'm so honored that you wrote this. You really summarized my entire artistic expression. I feel so seen. I still tears in my eyes from my first reading of it. Thank you so, so much for this.
12th Dec 2020 2:05pm
12th Dec 2020 9:20am
Gee....& i thought you was a'talkin'bout me.....Ha
Bless ye! & a fine write aswell.
Bless ye! & a fine write aswell.
12th Dec 2020 2:28pm
