Liquid metal metallic cravings

nice imagery ... Bless and love ... ..

Warm thanks for nice comment.🌷

I truly enjoyed this stimulating spill of liquid gold flowing through each word spoken indeed it does put one in mind of a lava lamp from back in the days in fact I have two of them myself I enjoy watching them create a beautiful masterpiece of art so tranquil and peaceful respect poet nicely composed respect

Wow nice to know you like ke lava lamps too, that you like them as well! Thanks soo much for your lovely fab comment! Best wishes,

Your very welcome respect 😁😇

The alchemy of your poem left me breathless. Love reading of the morphing of gold and other elements into a molten state. From lava to molten gold your evocation of the forms in a lava lamp takes me on a journey through the states of being in the earth that mesmerizes me. The detail of liquid metals you present is a thing of wonder. There is a spiritual nature here which is inescapable. And I love watching through your eyes as the solid turns to liquid.

John

Yayy wow even your comments read so eloquent, yours is a fab read in itself how you draw spiritual vibes from nature and my poem is great!!! Thanks soo much for that, have a great day poet!!!😊

You know very well how to hold meter. < ;.) 3

Thanks a bunch for the nice feedback!

Nicely put I myself love watching solids melt into liquid and flow

Aww Yayy super nice to know you like it too, my warmest thanks for comment! Take care.🌷😊

Very well written...😍
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"... onscreen molten lava... Gliding in serpentine ... ... etc ... etc..."
Climb the *log*, get to its *branches and leaves* and write poem like this.
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Thanks soo much for fine comment, your comment was a bit too sublime for me with English being only a second language for me I guess.

You're welcome.  
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The *log*, the *branches* and the *leaves*...  
... suggest internet sites appearing on the screen.

Wow very interesting piece I really dig this Zaynab!!👏 Love the imagery and whole vibe of this just awesome!!😍

Thanks soo much for such a lovely great comment, glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes,

The lava lamp is very cool.  Keep on writing.

Thanks a bunch!! Cheers!

I would imagine you'd enjoy the terminator films with Arnie too. There was lots of liquid moulding going on there.. ;-)

Woah cool I would like to check it out then, thanks for the idea poet!! A film with melting metal yay. Cheers!

Love the flow of this poem Z

Especially while it appears to have form to the rhyme scheme without really holding to any rules

It was a great read

Aye ah  yes my form and rhythm follows my muse instead of vice versa which makes my poems unconventional and unprofessional but some English poets said that since I can't follow known forms I should carry on with my own innovative blends for they said my poems could have a blend of forms such as triplets, couplets and quatrains which I only realise after they tell me.
Thanks soo much for still managing to enjoy the poem, I hope different is not bad, I really don't know how to stick to conventional usual known poetry forms at all, I don't think I could ever understand what they call a syllable count poem sth idylls or Sth.

It's a visually vivid stunning piece, the way you describe the metals and colors compared to things like honey and syrup to really stir up the senses. I've found myself watching a couple of videos from Australia when liquid aluminum is poured into an ant hill and then it's pulled out of the earth with this perfectly formed maze. Granted some folks are against that art; but the liquid form of these metals is something to be admired. You've done a really great job at guiding us through this verse with the rhyme and vivid descriptions.

Excellent work.

Woww thanks soo much for that interesting super comment, liquid metal does look very artistic and you impressed upon that in a fine way. Best wishes,

Dear ZK,

Reading your poem called to mind so many incredible images of what you describe. I found I was relating to your words and seeing the beauty in all these instances. I’ve never seen melting metals but the honey reference enabled me to relate to the similarities and then I remembered glass. Hot glass being molded and shaped to create beautiful objects always captures my awe and fascination. There’s a purity in it that I don’t always find elsewhere. Creative and thoughtful write. H🌷

My warmest thanks honorary a for your very lovely beautiful comment, it was delightful to read about melting glass yeahh imagining that was also very satisfying, got a watch that too now as I haven't yet.
Liquid fire lava magma I have watched and they are amazingly mindblowing.
Take care and have fun!

The syllabic harmonies are quite fluid, the unfolding of the diatribe has a feel of intimate confession, while maintaining control, which speaks of emotional intelligence and presence, lending the whole rather mellifluous dimensions. Metaphors seem a subtle and personal revelation. You close with that quite aside, which is charming. It's really lovely work and I thank you for directing me to it.

Wow thanks soo much for your high level comment, more eloquent than my poem indeed!! I'm much obliged, best wishes,

I got everything except diatribe, did you mean attack or harsh criticism by that??

No I misused the word diatribe as I sometimes do, like I tend to misuse the word verbiage. Sometimes it happens, sorry about that lol. I meant more like a monologue, a single voice speaking to the audience.

I like this.  Lava lamps are cool, you make them sound beyond this world.

Such variety in your imagery it’s dazzling .