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Falling
When the leaves fell,
We did too.
When it got cold,
Our love did too.
We did too.
When it got cold,
Our love did too.
Published 6th Dec 2020
Author's Note
My boyfriend broke up with me yesterday. This is a pain I had yet to know and I wish I had never experienced it
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6th Dec 2020 3:21am
Heartbreak is food
For a poet's pen
Without intense feelings
The inspiration to write
Is not felt
For a poet's pen
Without intense feelings
The inspiration to write
Is not felt
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- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
6th Dec 2020 3:33am
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2nd Aug 2021 11:16am
Ouch!!!
Belated Condolences on the death of that relationship
It would be a great relief to know that you are in a much better space and place now than you were back then
Being able to be brave enough to put your thoughts down and share your truth hopefully helped just a little bit
Stay Blessed
Belated Condolences on the death of that relationship
It would be a great relief to know that you are in a much better space and place now than you were back then
Being able to be brave enough to put your thoughts down and share your truth hopefully helped just a little bit
Stay Blessed
