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tide leaves the shore~
vacuous aching remains
as grains of sand
I tried to cling to
are pulled from
useless fingers;
I let them go on a sigh,
accepting I will never
see them again
vacuous aching remains
as grains of sand
I tried to cling to
are pulled from
useless fingers;
I let them go on a sigh,
accepting I will never
see them again
Published 6th Dec 2020
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6th Dec 2020 00:24am
Damn... such a powerful, aching spill. Big emotions in this little poem, Luna 💔
6th Dec 2020 4:43pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Dec 2020 11:45am
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6th Dec 2020 10:34pm
Letting go is one of the most difficult lessons to learn. It creates the pain that paves the way to unattachment via expectation. ❤
6th Dec 2020 11:41pm
It’s such a hard thing to do, but I’m finally ready. Thank you so much, Ahavati 💜
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- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
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8th Dec 2020 1:37pm
Such a powerful poem about letting go. You really pack a punch in a few short lines. Beautiful work, Luna.
8th Dec 2020 2:05pm
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