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Senryu - 12/2/2020 Triptych (Kinda rolls off the tongue)
Stop, remove ear buds
orchestra no tuning needs
natures symphony
Avian choir sings
soft rain peacefully plummets
soul cleansing morning
Throw open windows
whisper cool breeze, circulate
home-bound working joys
orchestra no tuning needs
natures symphony
Avian choir sings
soft rain peacefully plummets
soul cleansing morning
Throw open windows
whisper cool breeze, circulate
home-bound working joys
Published 2nd Dec 2020
Author's Note
Happy to finally have some Fall weather and equally thrilled to experience the season exo-office building 😃🙏
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2nd Dec 2020 9:48pm
2nd Dec 2020 9:59pm
2nd Dec 2020 10:51pm
2nd Dec 2020 11:31pm
Thank you Kristina❣❣ I am glad 6you felt peace it's so important in this turbulent time.
3rd Dec 2020 9:07pm
3rd Dec 2020 10:52pm
Daniel, I am thrilled, humbled, and honored by you r words. Your lovingly chosen adjectives express so well what constitutes the catalyst, the motivation for my poetry.
Cheers my brother
Cheers my brother
Anonymous
4th Dec 2020 7:59pm
You created the peaceful moment that I needed... so badly.... Ahhh, yes!... I feel it.
I adore senryś so much... some of my favorite styles of writing poetry.
🕊 🌹 💜
Ty so much for sharing
I adore senryś so much... some of my favorite styles of writing poetry.
🕊 🌹 💜
Ty so much for sharing
4th Dec 2020 11:09pm
My pleasure...thank you for reading, commenting beautifully, and sharing a love for Senryu. One can pack a lot of powerful meaning in 17 syllables. 💖🙏
5th Dec 2020 11:23am
9th Dec 2020 6:25am
9th Dec 2020 4:28am
9th Dec 2020 6:28am
I am so glad I've been able to write your kind of poem. I himbled to have done so.😍 Thank you for the RL❣❣
