There's no "Us" or "Them" only "We"~the people.

Somwthing different
But well written

I agree that it's different, absolutely. Well written? Hmmm.... it is what it is. I remember another poet on DUP once told me that I should publish everything! Regardless of how I feel of a poem's apparent personal worth (because like you, I'm insanely self critical) or my bias towards whatever piece might be in question. Publish all and everything, even writes that would normally result in me never letting them see the light of day, because who knows what might resonate. As scary as that is, I still freak out hitting submit when I'm not 100%.... (I'm such a baby!... lol)
Ty for reading, and the RL add, C
I apologize for the long reply!... lol
xoxo
💜 - B

The truth, in words.  Bingo!

Ty so much, Adagio
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xo
B

The truth, in words.  Bingo!

Damn... I do love me some Sarge.
("Heeeey there Sarge".....wink*wiggle wiggle*)

I love Pink Floyd's Dark Side Of The Moon... and I have seen them live several times.
So there!

yeah, science.. right?!
"I want to believe"....

I adore your visits... just more than you know!!
(finally)
I am a spoiled Blue and missed you.
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xoxo
B

Spoken with truth and honesty of conviction as it reflects the times we are living in now powerful and insightful piece raw and uncut truth nicely composed dear poetess..respect

My Dearest Stoney,
Thank you for the compliment and your inspirational visit, itself. I appreciate you reading and you have nothing but my respect in return 😉
Take care of yourself
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xoxo
B

You are very welcome dear poetess..respect enjoy your evening dear poetess wink with a smile 😁😇😘

Friendly Feedback (my chosen choice of commenting preference) usually means just that.
FRIENDLY comments only, are preferred. If I wanted an honest critique of my writing? I would have chosen THAT as my commenting preference to begin with. As "Honest Critique" is an option anyone can apply to their poems if that's what type of feedback they prefer to receive, OR even if you're looking to make comments, you can search for poets that have that filter applied to their poems of "Honest Critique" and comment solely on those particular poems. Therefore, avoiding ANY issues with someone who takes your criticism the possible wrong way. In all honesty that's what happened here with me, after reading your thoughts....No worries, I'm understanding (some may not be) that you're new and "you just got here" however, maybe some foresight and consideration for an author's preferences / feelings would be the best course of action until you've become familiar with the swing of things. IMO. just some food for thought, going forward with your DUP journey. Ty for reading, I'm appreciative of you taking the time and leaving  comments, too.  
Best of luck,  
-B

Bravo!

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Ty, Kink
I'm appreciative of your visit and the list add
So very nice to see you.
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xo
B

I am saddened by your reply and needless snark at my attempt to help. Your immediate harsh assumptions about a stranger and your reply are exactly why I said what I did. I can now see that my initial instincts were spot on.  
 
 
I do understand your decision to forgo my page and I am not offended in the least. Different strokes...  
 
You have misunderstood my thoughts completely and my first concern still stands, where I only want for you to have a pleasant and joyful DU experience as possible.  

 
Good luck and happy reading /writing  
 
-B

Ty so much, Tim
I'm extremely appreciative of your read / comments. The lack of will that people, in general, have to do just the basics to avoid spreading covid, is just ghastly. It boggles my mind. You're right, despite party affiliations, too.
Hopefully with new change comes better action and follow through... it remains to be seen!
Ty again
xoxo
B
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Ty for reading and your comments!
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xo
B

Snap! And one of my favorite Nietzsche quotes. Of course, being a "Nietzschean Nihilist" that I am, my fav quote is...
“Truth is a mobile army of metaphors, metonyms, anthropomorphisms, in short a sum of human relations which have been subjected to poetic and rhetorical intensification, translation and decoration […]; truths are illusions of which we have forgotten that they are illusions, metaphors which have become worn by frequent use and have lost all sensuous vigour […]. Yet we still do not know where the drive to truth comes from, for so far we have only heard about the obligation to be truthful which society imposes in order to exist"

He also said...Most are born to follow, only the few can lead. I love that. Blue, your powerful poem leads my friend. Bravo!
Amor Fati...Harry

Ty so much Harry!... *hand to heart  
I don't know about that leading part, - lol- but I do know that I was trying to be brave and publish a poem that I normally wouldn't even attempt, much less let see the light of day. A new brave idea at "publishing all I write"... we'll see how it goes..  

The Nietzsche saying, about people being born followers, is just so poignant and relevant. If only there were some sense of moral character in those that have been pushed or clawed their way to the forefront to take up a leading position to all these willing followers... I think, knowing that innate nature that people have to follow, was something that was and is counted on, to keep people complacent and 'in line'. That's why lies and propaganda work so well.... it's infuriating, yet true. Hopefully we're on a brighter path ahead!
Ty for all your lovely insights and the list add, Harry. Apologies for talking your ear off..
hahaha.  
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xoxo  
-Blue

Yes, Blue...Nietzsche taught me to never say that I have to do something...he taught me to shout...I choose to do this...I choose to think this...he taught me to take responsibilty for my choices...and to always have the courage to create my own values in life, regardless of what the "herd" would say.
Amor Fati...one must be a lover of their fate...all the suffering in life goes hand in hand with all the joy and pleasures...everything that happens in our lives, the good, the bad...is the material that each of us can use to construct this thing called, Me.
Have a great day my friend...keep the ink flowing...keep leading yourself upwards.

You've hit several fundamental topics right on the head here. I'd agree with Myanus (the poet in this thread, not my...) it can apply to either side. I've been meaning to write on this subject myself because the extreme fails to see the truth or don't want to understand. Many times I've creeped over to the other side just to see what they're saying or posting and it's pretty scary the way some people think.

This country was founded on basic principles and we have the courts to interpret those grey areas. But I do have to say that those that are not well educated in the process will believe anything, or let themselves be indoctrinated in those beliefs. I also blame social media. Journalism can always report on the facts and it's up to us to perceive and interpret, it's just not a perfect medium. However with social media, one person can reach millions. Too many times do these people use their social media and influence a population of young minds steering them in the wrong direction.

Either way, you've certainly stirred up a great conversation with this piece because we should always strive for the truth, even when it's harsh.

I get your point Wally and I agree that each side left and right do double down on their own confirmation biases, and possibly make a bad situation worse. I did not agree with myanus (the avatar) when he got personal and said each side is self serving and I felt that was a slight upon myself as well. Which I addressed. My whole issue is the fact that some people THEMSELVES are aok with  behavior that leads their fellow human beings to their deaths. They die. I have had someone close to me die due to covid. Yes, DIE. I have only talked about it one other time here on DUP. In a forum that I was reading from the shadows, until I finally couldn't take it anymore. This is personal to me and I know I'm more sensitive than I should be but I try and keep perspective as well. Sure, social media plays a part, but sadly, it's just more human nature and those masses who enjoy following as opposed to leading.
Ty for your comments, Wally. I love the way your mind works and I'm glad we can converse.
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Take care of yourself
xoxo
B

Thank you for sharing this poem.  I see you in a new light willing to fight the system, which is broken.  Keep on writing.

Thank you for your kind words, Francisco.
I appreciate you reading!
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B

"Patriotism is the last refuge of a scoundrel" - Samuel Johnson

need of the hour, the wisdom shared and highlighted above. Glad to hear some human spirit prevailing over the animal instinct amidst the wave of stoked fires of primal fears.

effective and well delivered i'd say the expression.

Thank you for such eloquently stated feedback, cf. I'm so sick & tired of the stark refusal of science and truth, here in The States.. It's just disgraceful. I long to finally find our way back to a better people of common sense, empathy, intellect and reason.
Time will tell.
I'm happy to see your presence on my page.
🙏 for the list add
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xoxo
B

God damn girl, how did I miss this slice of brilliance, this triple scoop of genius. I am gobsmacked, as.our British friends say❣❣ This fulfills many sapiosexual fantasies. This passage,"Reality, seems it's a new grown sinew" is a breathtaking metaphor. And wow wee this is so well stated and describes so  well the billshit we've had to endure lo these four years,
"Never taking time   
to expand our own minds;   
Due diligence, just ignored   
preferred to be spoonfed by poison " and as one who works in the legal industry, "due dilligence" turns me on 🤩

Ohh wow! I'm so surprised by this. Thank you for reading and your unreal comments... I am so glad you enjoyed this out of the norm write for me. I was just so fed up with it all. This bullshit we have to put up with and being somewhat held hostage because a few refuse to do what's right?!?!
I can't thank you enough for the Nom and all your beautiful words and love what you've shared with me tonight!
(hugs).
Ty so much
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xo
B