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The Aficionado
I keep my heart
in my pocket
in a little
brass locket,
with your picture
and a piece
of scripture
engraved
upon my mind
beneath moonbeams
and starshine
hand and hand
we unwind
as we gaze
into each other’s eyes
like honeybees
and butterflies
and I...
take sips of her mind
like the finest wine,
taking my time
to savor
every drop of her flavor
I study her
every movement,
fascinated by her behavior
captivated
by the way her
hips sway
to the music
she's fine art
much like Monet,
with a divine heart
and a beautiful body
that I could
gaze upon
for days
she's simply got
that magic touch
and
I'm not asking much,
just to be her friend
but in the end
I know
that
she
could be
so much more to me
if only in my wildest dreams
in my pocket
in a little
brass locket,
with your picture
and a piece
of scripture
engraved
upon my mind
beneath moonbeams
and starshine
hand and hand
we unwind
as we gaze
into each other’s eyes
like honeybees
and butterflies
and I...
take sips of her mind
like the finest wine,
taking my time
to savor
every drop of her flavor
I study her
every movement,
fascinated by her behavior
captivated
by the way her
hips sway
to the music
she's fine art
much like Monet,
with a divine heart
and a beautiful body
that I could
gaze upon
for days
she's simply got
that magic touch
and
I'm not asking much,
just to be her friend
but in the end
I know
that
she
could be
so much more to me
if only in my wildest dreams
Published 30th Nov 2020
Author's Note
The frantic scribblings of a hopeless romantic
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30th Nov 2020 00:07am
30th Nov 2020 00:09am
Thank you so much for your kind words, Olivia. I'm happy that it resonated with you ❤️
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30th Nov 2020 00:20am
Aww, thanks so much, unni ❤️
You're always sweet and supportive. I really appreciate that 😊
You're always sweet and supportive. I really appreciate that 😊
30th Nov 2020 00:16am
Your 'hopeless romantic' has a direct line to mine... Oh how you always hit me right in that perfect place. Gorgeous write, NB....You have a true poets heart and it's beautiful when we get a peek.
💜
xoxo
B
💜
xoxo
B
30th Nov 2020 00:22am
Aww, I'm so glad you liked it, Blue 💙
You are a pretty wonderful writer yourself, you know? 😊
You are a pretty wonderful writer yourself, you know? 😊
30th Nov 2020 00:26am
From one hopeless romantic to another, this is what it's all about isn't it? Your poem is so lovely and romantic! The flow was great as was the ending. Great poem!
30th Nov 2020 00:35am
Aww, thank you, Faith! I'm glad I'm not the only one, heh. I was feeling a little bit of 'la passione' when I wrote this one. So glad that you liked it ❤️😊
30th Nov 2020 00:39am
30th Nov 2020 00:33am
30th Nov 2020 00:44am
I really appreciate your kind commentary, Xiao! Thanks for your continued readership and support ❤️😊
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Nov 2021 00:37am
30th Nov 2020 00:36am
The best kind of hopelessness?
30th Nov 2020 00:55am
I suppose it's better to be hopelessly in love rather than just plain hopeless, lol. Thanks for taking the time to comment and RL, MyLadyCharlotina. It means a lot ❤️
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30th Nov 2020 3:49am
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1st Dec 2020 2:45am
Aww, thanks so much for your kind words, Heavyn . It's good to see you back again ❤️😊
30th Nov 2020 5:44am
30th Nov 2020 11:04am
30th Nov 2020 3:37pm
30th Nov 2020 7:41pm
Beautiful NB!!! You have originated an incredible work of art writing about love in such an imaginative and whimsical way. And who doesn't appreciate a hopeless romantic who is so in love with love. Great work brother!
30th Nov 2020 9:47pm
30th Nov 2020 11:08pm
And if she were to read this, she would be falling for you.
This was the epitome of love and passion, so close and yet so far.
Best of luck in the comp.
This was the epitome of love and passion, so close and yet so far.
Best of luck in the comp.
1st Dec 2020 00:08am
Hey NB.......this would be a dream come true for sure.......thank you for sharing a precious side of your soul........luv this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st Dec 2020 8:22am
Dear NB,
If I could give you more than one RL I would. Frantic scribblings or not you’ve written what so many of us have wished and experienced present or past. Beautiful. H🌷
If I could give you more than one RL I would. Frantic scribblings or not you’ve written what so many of us have wished and experienced present or past. Beautiful. H🌷
2nd Dec 2020 11:00pm
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