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chipped.
in the wee
early hours
of mo(u)rning
that's when I noticed it,
so clear
betrayal
has broken off a chip
yet, a heart beats
-still-
while cracked
an'd missing... it's very own piece
Published 28th Nov 2020
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28th Nov 2020 3:47pm
just purging emotion
not so very dire
but thank you for the lovely comment
I'm grateful for you
💜
xoxo
B
not so very dire
but thank you for the lovely comment
I'm grateful for you
💜
xoxo
B
28th Nov 2020 2:19pm
💜
Ty LilD. I do love seeing you on my page.
-you brought a smile
I hope you're enjoying Jade! I am so excited for you
about her!
Much love,
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Ty LilD. I do love seeing you on my page.
-you brought a smile
I hope you're enjoying Jade! I am so excited for you
about her!
Much love,
💜🌹💜
xo
B
28th Nov 2020 3:17pm
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30th Nov 2020 7:52pm
Those early hours are the most brutal when all is quiet and your mind is able to see things even more clear.
Your work here conveys that, seeing the heartbreak more clearly for what it was. It's sad and beautiful at the same time.
Your work here conveys that, seeing the heartbreak more clearly for what it was. It's sad and beautiful at the same time.
30th Nov 2020 8:17pm
Awww thank you Wally!
'Sad and beautiful' at the same time is my own personal catnip / kryptonite, so that's one hell of a compliment in my opinion. Always lovely to see you!
💜
xoxo
B
'Sad and beautiful' at the same time is my own personal catnip / kryptonite, so that's one hell of a compliment in my opinion. Always lovely to see you!
💜
xoxo
B
Hmmmmm, just another beautiful and compelling artistic gem "B". Sadly trust can sometimes take an eternity to earn, yet it can be broken in a second. Betrayal seems to be an implicit part of love. You got Skillz with words girl, lol.
30th Nov 2020 9:39pm
You make me blush with your words of such support and generous nature. Ty so much for reading and your compliments..I'm overwhelmed and I really do appreciate your time, the RL add and all the encouragement
All the best,
🌹 -Blue
💜
xoxo
All the best,
🌹 -Blue
💜
xoxo
23rd Sep 2022 9:38pm
It can be repaired, but once chipped there always seems to be a tell-tale sign of of previous damage. The trust is never restored to its pristine state.
But you Blue, maybe another or the same, can mend your heart. Although allowing another person entry to it may take more doing. A wary blue eye keeping vigil.
But you Blue, maybe another or the same, can mend your heart. Although allowing another person entry to it may take more doing. A wary blue eye keeping vigil.
