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when the wind gust hits you  
and the first few drops
smash into your face  
and you witness  
the trees bowing  
in unison  
under its force  
the thunderous force  
you must know that you are  
amongst The Elements  
not just your element  
for the petrichor  
engulfs your lungs  
you feel higher than high  
like perched on a cliff's edge  
and the darkest of grey  
signalling their intent  
sending down sparks  
in patterns of veins  
nothing... if you see it( for what it is)  
more beautiful  
than this coming together  
of the elements  
the sky touching the land  
lightning - its extended hands  
the water kissing the sand  
the clouds the marching bands  
the senses  
they're are jolted  
into  l i f e  
the sight  
the sounds  
the taste  
the smell  
the touch  
no other joy  
as this much  
 
no  
this ain't some  
elemental violence  
it is mother Nature's  
answer to silence  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Written by cold_fusion
Published | Edited 27th Nov 2020
Author's Note
what a madman sees.... and hears, touches, tastes and feels
Every occurrence of rain. An event. A meeting of the elements.
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