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r a i n ix
when the wind gust hits you
and the first few drops
smash into your face
and you witness
the trees bowing
in unison
under its force
the thunderous force
you must know that you are
amongst The Elements
not just your element
for the petrichor
engulfs your lungs
you feel higher than high
like perched on a cliff's edge
and the darkest of grey
signalling their intent
sending down sparks
in patterns of veins
nothing... if you see it( for what it is)
more beautiful
than this coming together
of the elements
the sky touching the land
lightning - its extended hands
the water kissing the sand
the clouds the marching bands
the senses
they're are jolted
into l i f e
the sight
the sounds
the taste
the smell
the touch
no other joy
as this much
no
this ain't some
elemental violence
it is mother Nature's
answer to silence
Published 26th Nov 2020
| Edited 27th Nov 2020
Author's Note
what a madman sees.... and hears, touches, tastes and feels
Every occurrence of rain. An event. A meeting of the elements.
Every occurrence of rain. An event. A meeting of the elements.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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26th Nov 2020 2:32pm
4th Dec 2020 00:49am
welcome your presence dear Poetess.
am glad the scribble conveyed some meaning.
much gratitude for the honor and the review.
warm regards
cf
am glad the scribble conveyed some meaning.
much gratitude for the honor and the review.
warm regards
cf
26th Nov 2020 7:03pm
Nicely composed brother...respect love the flow of your thoughts on this piece respect 🙏😎
4th Dec 2020 00:51am
welcome dear Brother admired!
always a joy and an honor, your presence and support.
deep respects
cf
always a joy and an honor, your presence and support.
deep respects
cf
4th Dec 2020 9:46am
27th Nov 2020 5:21am
4th Dec 2020 00:52am
welcome dear brother Poet!
am glad, super glad you like the scribble.
much gratitude, for your presence and honoring of the ink.
warm regards
cf
am glad, super glad you like the scribble.
much gratitude, for your presence and honoring of the ink.
warm regards
cf
27th Nov 2020 7:16am
This really captures the might of the storm both fearsome and awe inspiring. Top write 👍😀
4th Dec 2020 00:53am
wow!
to have your presence and such kind a review of the scribble. Humbled by the honor dear Poet admired.
warm regards
cf
to have your presence and such kind a review of the scribble. Humbled by the honor dear Poet admired.
warm regards
cf
27th Nov 2020 10:11am
4th Dec 2020 00:55am
i welcome your dear Friend Admired!
appreciate beyond words, your kindness and support.
truly honored.
much gratitude
cf
appreciate beyond words, your kindness and support.
truly honored.
much gratitude
cf
30th Nov 2020 11:41pm
Oh, wow, this is awesome!
Beautiful, lovely, fierce, powerful, and somehow calming, then, peaceful in its resolution.
Absolutely enchanting! ❤
Beautiful, lovely, fierce, powerful, and somehow calming, then, peaceful in its resolution.
Absolutely enchanting! ❤
4th Dec 2020 00:57am
welcome
dear respected Poetess
appreciate deeply the kind review and honoring of this scribble.
am glad i was able to convey something close to what i feel, see.
much appreciated, the kindness the gesture.
warm regards
cf
dear respected Poetess
appreciate deeply the kind review and honoring of this scribble.
am glad i was able to convey something close to what i feel, see.
much appreciated, the kindness the gesture.
warm regards
cf
5th Feb 2021 5:05am
this made me have that underlying thrillseeking feeling to go out in thunder and lightning, then you have to kindly remind yourself it can kill you too, no matter how beautiful and breathtaking it is mother nature can give and take away but we still sit in awe looking out of our windows 😆 there were some brilliant lines here which i would like to give honourable mentions
'you must know that you are amongst The Elements
not just your element'
'no
this ain't some
elemental violence
it is mother Nature's
answer to silence'
all in all this was one hell of a lightning bolt ⚡️
thank you for sharing :)
-ethan
'you must know that you are amongst The Elements
not just your element'
'no
this ain't some
elemental violence
it is mother Nature's
answer to silence'
all in all this was one hell of a lightning bolt ⚡️
thank you for sharing :)
-ethan
5th Feb 2021 11:31am
welcome is your presence Ethan.
also welcome is your kind review.
funnily, about a couple of hours ago, I had the exact experience which you've just mentioned ...a street away ,driving towards home came under an intense electrical storm...yes it was beautiful but , witnessing the lightning strikes and the deafening sound of the thunderstorms so Close to population had me a bit scared too.
I thank you for your generous appreciation of the ink.
respects
cf
also welcome is your kind review.
funnily, about a couple of hours ago, I had the exact experience which you've just mentioned ...a street away ,driving towards home came under an intense electrical storm...yes it was beautiful but , witnessing the lightning strikes and the deafening sound of the thunderstorms so Close to population had me a bit scared too.
I thank you for your generous appreciation of the ink.
respects
cf
