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FEEL THE ERUPTION
Feel the eruption
from my balls, inside of you,
whitewashing your walls.
You respond with a
reciprocal outpouring,
wetting skins and sheets.
Adrenalin rush
sends us into ecstasy
far above ceiling.
High in a heaven
minds, bodies, souls seem to be,
our bed long way down
To me this is the
real moment two are one.
'How was it for you?'
Together we land
as we recover our breaths,
sweat, juice and seed mix.
In union we
stay as my hardness subsides.
We embrace, less tight.
On my back I roll
off your relaxing torso
when my welcome's passed.
You briefly get up
to go into the bathroom,
relieve, come back cleaned.
We drift off to sleep,
facing ceiling, hand in hand
to awake next dawn.
from my balls, inside of you,
whitewashing your walls.
You respond with a
reciprocal outpouring,
wetting skins and sheets.
Adrenalin rush
sends us into ecstasy
far above ceiling.
High in a heaven
minds, bodies, souls seem to be,
our bed long way down
To me this is the
real moment two are one.
'How was it for you?'
Together we land
as we recover our breaths,
sweat, juice and seed mix.
In union we
stay as my hardness subsides.
We embrace, less tight.
On my back I roll
off your relaxing torso
when my welcome's passed.
You briefly get up
to go into the bathroom,
relieve, come back cleaned.
We drift off to sleep,
facing ceiling, hand in hand
to awake next dawn.
Published 21st Nov 2020
| Edited 9th Aug 2021
Author's Note
Post coital narration in haikus.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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21st Nov 2020 2:28pm
When endorphins are in play there isn’t much we need to say.
I liked the subtle hints that this is more then a one night stand. In an earlier period there would have been a cigarette light up.
Nicely done.
I liked the subtle hints that this is more then a one night stand. In an earlier period there would have been a cigarette light up.
Nicely done.
22nd Nov 2020 3:29am
