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Constellation
ordained awakening
of universal promise,
nebulae swirling
in rapturous delight;
worlds collide against
the sonorous vibrations
of eternity
as sultry reverberation
entices
the entirety
of then and now,
near and far
to constellate in celebration
of universal promise,
nebulae swirling
in rapturous delight;
worlds collide against
the sonorous vibrations
of eternity
as sultry reverberation
entices
the entirety
of then and now,
near and far
to constellate in celebration
Published 21st Nov 2020
Author's Note
This was written for Eerie’s Painting Words Competition. My inspiration was the artwork of Murat Akyol, specifically the piece pictured above. I’ve searched all over and haven’t been able to locate the title.
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21st Nov 2020 12:22pm
Now THAT is what I'd call a "brain storm" of creativity.
Good luck in the Painting Words comp!
Good luck in the Painting Words comp!
21st Nov 2020 7:28pm
21st Nov 2020 1:28pm
This is stunning Luna.. an just captures the artworks vibe perfectly.. ♥️
21st Nov 2020 7:28pm
21st Nov 2020 2:29pm
It's like a sternum full of multiflavored Pop Rocks! My poem is a greasy, frozen pizza compared to this thoughtful explosion. Ugh.
21st Nov 2020 7:34pm
If only I could learn to play with my words the way you do, *sigh*.
...and now I want pizza.
...and now I want pizza.
23rd Nov 2020 2:19pm
21st Nov 2020 5:52pm
An excellent entry, Luna. The imagery is so vivid through the words; it truly does the painting an honor.
21st Nov 2020 7:34pm
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