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Would You Believe
Would you believe me if I told you I never used to smile?
Would you believe me if I said I was a pessimist?
Would you believe me if I told you I used to cry every night?
What if I told you, you make me the happiest I’ve ever felt?
What if I said you make me look at the world through optimistic eyes?
What if I told you, I sleep so much easier next to you?
Would you believe me if I said I was a pessimist?
Would you believe me if I told you I used to cry every night?
What if I told you, you make me the happiest I’ve ever felt?
What if I said you make me look at the world through optimistic eyes?
What if I told you, I sleep so much easier next to you?
Published 19th Nov 2020
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19th Nov 2020 2:19am
I BELIEVE the magic of true Love has flowed from your heart right/write into your your pen and spilled into this wonderful write...Bravo!!!!
19th Nov 2020 2:42am
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19th Nov 2020 6:13am
True love is having someone you can relax with. I warmed to what reads like having found light at the end of a tunnel.
24th Jan 2021 4:26am
This bleeds of joy, optimism, hope, love, invigoration, and positivity. Very well done.
