NO/ONE

I am my own
island
of two yearning
hearts, beating

I am your
Ocean
Advancing
Receding

I delve
your
deepest depths
that ache
increasing

I bob
At your surface
Catching,
Releasing

I drown in
pools
of gorgeous brown
secrets known
a new beginning

Resuscitate me
With the sound
Of your quaking
Underpinnings

This exchange is awesome..! Interesting stuff!! You guys duet well...

:D

O' to breathe anew
sultry sighs of
restorative Blue
sweet elixir'd
through the air
now reassured with
lively spinning






Thx @Eli!

Warm front
Turns the frost to dew
Look up and all I see is you
This radiant grin
A sight so rare
The sky heats up
The clouds are thinning

As new pink light
shines upon your face
I tenderly trace ~
As you anoint my lips
of your humbled grace
Two tongues
now, together swirling

Reflection in
A sea like glass:
A comet burns
Toward earthly splash
Like thirst at last
Explosion quenched
Clenched hands release
A lovers’ flag unfurling

undulating waves
O' crest and fall, crest and fall
mews: hear her calling




(a senryú)

Night crests, senses dull ~
Let us sleep to dream anew
In deep shades of blue

Okay you two are just showing off now 😊. Just collaborate and post something already! This is already awesome improv!
BTW- dear S,
I only wish I’d known this poem 20 years ago. It might have helped me understand marriage a little better. Insightful and thoughtful write. H🌷

Honoria, your words are a balm that makes my skin tingle. Thank you!

I like the original but the comments are truly beautiful; I love the spontaneous continuance between you both.

Back and forth poetry is one of my great joys in life.