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I found his journal entitled 'me'
the words were a surprise
I'd never seen such desire in his eyes
the one he spoke about was actually me
now to make us we
the words were a surprise
I'd never seen such desire in his eyes
the one he spoke about was actually me
now to make us we
Published 17th Nov 2020
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17th Nov 2020 8:45pm
19th Nov 2020 8:17pm
17th Nov 2020 8:46pm
I've always found that (re)discovering old works and writings certainly makes for excitement.
Nice verse.
Welcome to DUP.
Nice verse.
Welcome to DUP.
19th Nov 2020 8:16pm
Anonymous
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18th Nov 2020 00:45am
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19th Nov 2020 8:19pm
18th Nov 2020 4:19am
Dear I,
What a happy surprise to find. Your poem is filled with promise and hope for a loving relationship. Very lovely read. Welcome to DU. Pleasure to meet and read your poetry. H🌷
What a happy surprise to find. Your poem is filled with promise and hope for a loving relationship. Very lovely read. Welcome to DU. Pleasure to meet and read your poetry. H🌷
19th Nov 2020 8:22pm
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20th Nov 2020 3:58pm
Well phrased , as a first poem here , Lady Igraine
Words delicately twisted , in sublime rhyme...
I believe you know , you are welcome , and shall
be , more than appreciated here...
Words delicately twisted , in sublime rhyme...
I believe you know , you are welcome , and shall
be , more than appreciated here...
6th Jul 2021 8:36pm
22nd Nov 2020 5:36pm
Found or snooping? : )
Poem filled with promise. Eloquently and concisely presented.
Poem filled with promise. Eloquently and concisely presented.
6th Jul 2021 8:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
28th Nov 2020 1:38am
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6th Jul 2021 8:34pm
28th Nov 2020 5:02pm
discovery, romance, love
Nice style and flow
good structure, short and to the point!
cadence and metering
nice ink!
Respect
Nice style and flow
good structure, short and to the point!
cadence and metering
nice ink!
Respect
6th Jul 2021 8:38pm
29th Nov 2020 5:07pm
Very nice first post! It's nice to meet you! I enjoyed your poem and It looking forward to reading more from you!
6th Jul 2021 8:39pm
17th Jan 2021 11:06pm
A heart-warming sentiment, excellently penned. And welcome to DUP. Best regards, Josh.
6th Jul 2021 8:41pm
Anonymous
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5th Feb 2021 11:56am
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6th Jul 2021 8:42pm
7th Feb 2021 7:45pm
Welcome (3 months late) to DUP.
The title (4 syllable word) almost fits into the poem as a line in its own right.
The title (4 syllable word) almost fits into the poem as a line in its own right.
6th Jul 2021 8:45pm
