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Demi God
as my
back arched
at his
deep penetration
salty moist
sweat trickled
dripped
upon silken sheets
of lust
our bodies
collided
shuddered
in this night
of unfettered sin
God
did shy away
at the display
before him
while
the devil
simply rejoiced
the dance
was ancient
the need
was primal
in naked
exposure
a beautiful thing
to behold
i was
taken to the
heavens
by a demi god
back arched
at his
deep penetration
salty moist
sweat trickled
dripped
upon silken sheets
of lust
our bodies
collided
shuddered
in this night
of unfettered sin
God
did shy away
at the display
before him
while
the devil
simply rejoiced
the dance
was ancient
the need
was primal
in naked
exposure
a beautiful thing
to behold
i was
taken to the
heavens
by a demi god
Published 17th Nov 2020
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17th Nov 2020 10:38am
17th Nov 2020 10:39am
17th Nov 2020 1:12pm
18th Nov 2020 6:05am
Being taken to heaven by a demi god - conjures up a picture of a hunky rider. Favourite lines:
the dance
was ancient
the need
was primal
the dance
was ancient
the need
was primal
8th Jan 2021 9:34pm
7th Feb 2021 2:46pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
31st May 2021 10:53pm
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7th May 2022 8:20pm
3rd Jul 2023 6:29pm
Whew!
Damn girl.
I just read your poems. This along with the others are so erotically alluring. You speak the desires of women so eloquently.
Looking forward to more. Much more.
Damn girl.
I just read your poems. This along with the others are so erotically alluring. You speak the desires of women so eloquently.
Looking forward to more. Much more.
