drunkish memory diaries circa 1980s

Just having a few and going along with the vibes of  yesteryears my friend, glad to have you along for
this journey 😘
Jackie xx

Perhaps Reggie,  I’m always game for collective creativity 👍🏻
Jackie :)

This made me think of Bartles and James Wine Coolers.... and my sister's gremlin car driving me to Clearwater Beach... the smell of aqua net and this song on the radio...
She's exactly your age, Jackie! ... I can still 'see her brown skin shining in the sun '
This song is instant flashback!
Ty for sharing 💜
xoxo
B

Yeah lol I often wore nothing but a bikini and Sarong
and pumps :) it’s hard to believe it’s been 36 years ago . Thank you for the reading list my friend 😘
Jackie 😘

I absolutely loved the energy of this, Jackie! <3

There are a few suggestions I think would improve it:

soft[ , ] white-leather, long-heel pumps    

Always comma between two adjectives to give the reader a bit of a pause to fully digest the imagery. Also, using a hyphen can link together pertinent adjectives as well. I've exampled above. Read your line then read the suggested revision. See how you go slower, absorbe the delicious imagery?

the horizon, it never ends /
when [ your ] young, everything seems possible...    

I'd suggest diving the final line up somewhat. There are so many ways to go with it, but the above is just an example. If you're going to use 'your' ( which you really don't need ), make sure you correct it to 'you're'!

Again, loved the vibe of this! It's honest and real! xo

I hope you are well my love-rly woman!
I made some adjustments according to your wonderful help mamita ❤️  
I hope this is bettah? Let me know and thanks for the reading list, I appreciate  all your support especially the free grammar lessons lol 👍🏻🤗😘  
Thank you Ava  
Love  
Jackie ❤️

Doesn't sound so drunkish to me! I loved the 80's. Thanks for the flashback, Jackie.

Yes hello good Sir :) me too love the music 🎼  
you know, I can’t imagine writing without music . The stoic vibe it’s to overwhelmingly counterproductive for me.. anyway glad you enjoyed this my first page of dunkish memories , in fact I’m going to change the title to drunkish memory diaries , you’ve just inspired me thanks Johnny, and thanks  for the visit  
I appreciate you🤗
Jackie xx

Beautifully proportional detail to this nostalgic trip in the way back machine. I remember the times. The air has a different hue, subtle but noticeable, when I return to former decades. 💖🙏

Thank you Daniel, I always appreciate you :)
Hugs  
Jackie xx

The days of clams and sand pails. I remember it well in your polka dot kini.  

Yeah the good ol days :) eh Al :)
Jackie xx

As Leonard Cohen said...I now ache in the places that I use to play...well...I can still play a little lol. Dazzling two piece Jackie.
Cheers...Harry

Thanks Harry you are always so sweet !
Loves you 😘🤗
Jackie xoxoxo

Complete nostalgia, Broom

Thank you my friend  you are well bmt  
🤗🤗
Broomie xo

The world is at your feet when you're young and free. I've been there. I wish I could go back but like eddie money sings  "I wanna go back, and do it all over but I can't go back, I know."

I don’t think I would do it over again. I’ve been a grown-up my whole life :)
Thanks for looking Tim and thanks for the list
I’m happy we are becoming friends
Jackie 🤗

80s were the time of life for piss and vinegar swagger

Fucking A winner ink

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Hey there nice to see you Poe, it’s been awhile !
Yeah the 80 were my stomping grounds down in Daytona Beach, I Lived there the entire 80s
Thanks for the visit .
Hugs
Jackie xoxox

Oh yes, many drunkish 80s memories... I don't live in a bikini-wearing zone, but I still get the vibe! Great fun. 😊

Did you happen to listen to the music that goes along with it? Regardless thank you for stopping by glad you like this don’t be a stranger 😊😊
Zazzles ☺️

I tried the music, but it said "video unavailable". Perhaps it's too much for frozen Canadian ears...??

A vision of paradise. This took me to Pensacola, Florida, and the summer with a celebration of youth unfolding all around. You really painted the scene with zest. I enjoyed every moment of this word movie as it unreeled in my mind's eye. The privilege of youth was never more resplendent than in your poem.

Xo
John