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Secrets
I like having secrets. I hold them close.
But not as weapons of power and control.
To hang them over one's head would be a betrayal of trust.
So I hold them inside of my own head and heart.
They dig down deep inside of me like shovels removing earth...
Getting deeper with each shovelful of Self I remove.
Such plutonian ways are often misunderstood.
When reaching the core means reaching the Divine.
But not as weapons of power and control.
To hang them over one's head would be a betrayal of trust.
So I hold them inside of my own head and heart.
They dig down deep inside of me like shovels removing earth...
Getting deeper with each shovelful of Self I remove.
Such plutonian ways are often misunderstood.
When reaching the core means reaching the Divine.
Published 14th Nov 2020
| Edited 15th Nov 2020
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14th Nov 2020 11:48am
14th Nov 2020 12:37pm
Lots of depth with this Sweet Write.... Secrets are like hidden gems just like this gem...Nicely Done!!!
14th Nov 2020 10:22pm
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4th Jan 2021 2:15am
Very well written , and filled with depth and power...
This , speaks of your awareness , and depth of soul...
"Such plutonian ways are often misunderstood.
When reaching the core means reaching the Divine"
As a Poetess , you shine in the dark !
This , speaks of your awareness , and depth of soul...
"Such plutonian ways are often misunderstood.
When reaching the core means reaching the Divine"
As a Poetess , you shine in the dark !
4th Jan 2021 5:45am
Glad you enjoyed this. Your feedback means so much to me! Thanks for the encouragement :-)
4th Jan 2021 5:56am
My pleasure , Distortions...
You show great potential , via your poetry...
You incorporate the depth of feeling , with
intelligent phrasing , and *that* exihibits
excellence in motion , in poetry...
Very well done...
You show great potential , via your poetry...
You incorporate the depth of feeling , with
intelligent phrasing , and *that* exihibits
excellence in motion , in poetry...
Very well done...
24th Oct 2021 4:40pm
There is such depth and presence in silence and I feel like your poem has captured that vibration. Beautiful and contemplative work.
