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message in a bottle
In a fetid BarcaLounger, he stubbed out an unfiltered cig, and took a long pull
from a short-necked bottle.
Each gulp warmed his windpipe,
as the amber-colored solvent
was taken up into his blood.
Worn toes of hand made, mud covered
Lucchese boots peeked above the bottle.
Loyal foot-soldiers in his battle with life.
Hard questions, that had been
chewing at the walls of his gut,
began to liquify and boil-up in his mind.
His eyes closed and the bottle slipped
from his nicotine-stained hands,
as his stubborn heart slowed.
Whatever whiskey wisdom he sought
spread out on the dusty Linoleum.
This would not be his last attempt
to find a message in the mash.
from a short-necked bottle.
Each gulp warmed his windpipe,
as the amber-colored solvent
was taken up into his blood.
Worn toes of hand made, mud covered
Lucchese boots peeked above the bottle.
Loyal foot-soldiers in his battle with life.
Hard questions, that had been
chewing at the walls of his gut,
began to liquify and boil-up in his mind.
His eyes closed and the bottle slipped
from his nicotine-stained hands,
as his stubborn heart slowed.
Whatever whiskey wisdom he sought
spread out on the dusty Linoleum.
This would not be his last attempt
to find a message in the mash.
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