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seeing my cpn on friday (tomorrow)
night. 1:20.
maybe if i get this down, it will go away.
maybe not.
keeping a tight leash on an instinct
before it gets loose and tears a big chunk outta something.
i hope i get some sleep.
gotta find coherence
conciseness.
can’t let this dog run
unchecked.
undiagnosed.
difficult to describe
except in riddles
something
is starting to scream.
please gods stop the ban sidhe
before it rips my face off
please doctor believe me
this is no fairy tale
fuck i hope i get some sleep.
fuck this i hope i get to sleep.
lock me up to go to sleep.
I WANT TO GO TO SLEEP
maybe if i get this down, it will go away.
maybe not.
keeping a tight leash on an instinct
before it gets loose and tears a big chunk outta something.
i hope i get some sleep.
gotta find coherence
conciseness.
can’t let this dog run
unchecked.
undiagnosed.
difficult to describe
except in riddles
something
is starting to scream.
please gods stop the ban sidhe
before it rips my face off
please doctor believe me
this is no fairy tale
fuck i hope i get some sleep.
fuck this i hope i get to sleep.
lock me up to go to sleep.
I WANT TO GO TO SLEEP
Published 12th Nov 2020
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if anyone has any kind of busywork for me to do...
im scared somethings happening again in my head
im scared somethings happening again in my head
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12th Nov 2020 11:51am
hope it goes decent enough, lady
expressed very well, maybe think about putting another book together.
shine on
expressed very well, maybe think about putting another book together.
shine on
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2025 10:45pm
12th Nov 2020 12:57pm
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12th Nov 2020 5:26pm
Thinking about and sending you strengthing energy, anna.
Have you relooked at your second book? It's truly worthy of publishing.
Have you relooked at your second book? It's truly worthy of publishing.
12th Nov 2020 5:26pm
I love you too
Do you know how to knit?
Or hey, a part time job in a fish and chips place,
I heard they eat that over in England.
Oh hey, about this time of year, you got all that fog and
long dark nights and short days.
Do you have money for a tanning bed session,
that puts vitamin D back in you,
you know, your own body makes it
but it has to have sunlight to make it.
I wish I could check on you in the morning,
maybe I could,
flights are cheap
Do you know how to knit?
Or hey, a part time job in a fish and chips place,
I heard they eat that over in England.
Oh hey, about this time of year, you got all that fog and
long dark nights and short days.
Do you have money for a tanning bed session,
that puts vitamin D back in you,
you know, your own body makes it
but it has to have sunlight to make it.
I wish I could check on you in the morning,
maybe I could,
flights are cheap
Anonymous
13th Nov 2020 7:10pm
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A Deep Underground Pamphlet/
Anna’s letter from Hogwarts, Ricky
Good evening
“You’re a wizard, Harry!” is said by Hagrid
and I hope you’ll be happy
with some of my get go banter
so I wish your evening good
Hello, Anna:)
Here’s my interpretation of seeing my cpn on Friday
I’ve too worried about an appointment
laying awake tossing and turning
Only a few hours sleep
beating the alarm clock
to getting up with a head that’s hurting
I think you’re alright
and my attention doesn’t need to be
brought to that line
“please gods stop the SIDHE”
Constructive criticism
wouldn’t help and would be a lie
to say I, am here, to recommend a r, c, k, y
Poured the money out of my Cadbury Mini Egg tub
and altogether there is £68.91
Like they used to do on ships
we could make biscuits
with water and on flour I pass
Later, with decisions decisions
shower or bath?
Keep posting beautiful
A Deep Underground Pamphlet/
Anna’s letter from Hogwarts, Ricky
Good evening
“You’re a wizard, Harry!” is said by Hagrid
and I hope you’ll be happy
with some of my get go banter
so I wish your evening good
Hello, Anna:)
Here’s my interpretation of seeing my cpn on Friday
I’ve too worried about an appointment
laying awake tossing and turning
Only a few hours sleep
beating the alarm clock
to getting up with a head that’s hurting
I think you’re alright
and my attention doesn’t need to be
brought to that line
“please gods stop the SIDHE”
Constructive criticism
wouldn’t help and would be a lie
to say I, am here, to recommend a r, c, k, y
Poured the money out of my Cadbury Mini Egg tub
and altogether there is £68.91
Like they used to do on ships
we could make biscuits
with water and on flour I pass
Later, with decisions decisions
shower or bath?
Keep posting beautiful
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jan 2022 4:45am
16th Dec 2020 1:49am
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23rd Dec 2020 2:51pm
Nice poem.
... ... ...
I like the following verses:
" ... difficult to describe... except in riddles... something... is starting to scream..."
😍👍
... ... ...
I like the following verses:
" ... difficult to describe... except in riddles... something... is starting to scream..."
😍👍
