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Stolen moonlight
If I let my guard down
You’d see me
Raw
Exposed
Stolen moonlight
Catching you If you fell
Into my arms
Runaway passion
The wrong side of town
No one knows us here
We’re safe
Till we go back
Lovers on the fringe
A river with no name
Haunting
Necessary
You’d see me
Raw
Exposed
Stolen moonlight
Catching you If you fell
Into my arms
Runaway passion
The wrong side of town
No one knows us here
We’re safe
Till we go back
Lovers on the fringe
A river with no name
Haunting
Necessary
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Re. Stolen moonlight
12th Nov 2020 1:52am
Speak.. simply beautiful words.. no foul, just soul.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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12th Nov 2020 2:02am
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12th Nov 2020 2:03am
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2020 2:45am
"A river with no name..."
Yours is some beautiful poetry, PS.
..... Your inner Outlaw let the Poet roar tonight
Howl away at that moon.
Yeah.
love it.
X
-B
Yours is some beautiful poetry, PS.
..... Your inner Outlaw let the Poet roar tonight
Howl away at that moon.
Yeah.
love it.
X
-B
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12th Nov 2020 2:51am
I ran away for a few hours
Writing myself back to Poetspeak
Appreciate the RL add
Thx
X
Writing myself back to Poetspeak
Appreciate the RL add
Thx
X
Re. Stolen moonlight
12th Nov 2020 3:13am
Lovely poetry, PoetSpeak.
"No one knows us here"
Ah, to just runaway with no one to answer to, no one to question, no one to care. Free to follow our own hearts...now that's a romantic dream.
❤❤❤❤
"No one knows us here"
Ah, to just runaway with no one to answer to, no one to question, no one to care. Free to follow our own hearts...now that's a romantic dream.
❤❤❤❤
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12th Nov 2020 3:59am
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Re. Stolen moonlight
12th Nov 2020 7:42am
Dear PS,
Where’s this PS been hiding? The softer side and it’s very nice. You carry both sides, soft and edgy very well. H🌷
Where’s this PS been hiding? The softer side and it’s very nice. You carry both sides, soft and edgy very well. H🌷
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Re: Re. Stolen moonlight
12th Nov 2020 12:19pm
Good Morning H
Thx for your comment
This Poetspeak has always been around but in a writing funk of late. Trying to find the courage to write myself out of it .....
Hope all is well by you
I’m sober 51 days btw, a new dawn ....
🤠
Thx for your comment
This Poetspeak has always been around but in a writing funk of late. Trying to find the courage to write myself out of it .....
Hope all is well by you
I’m sober 51 days btw, a new dawn ....
🤠
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12th Nov 2020 5:27pm
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12th Nov 2020 6:13pm
Re. Stolen moonlight
12th Nov 2020 9:46pm
how the hell did i miss this?!
this one hits hard. like dead in the chest hurts hard.
well done.
this one hits hard. like dead in the chest hurts hard.
well done.
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Re: Re. Stolen moonlight
12th Nov 2020 10:21pm
Yeah, not like you to miss one like this
I'm sharpening my sword, a smackdown poem is coming
Gonna be fun ....
I'm sharpening my sword, a smackdown poem is coming
Gonna be fun ....
Re. Stolen moonlight
15th Nov 2020 7:32am
Not sure why this has underlying emotion of forbidden love (and lust), with the nostalgic song playing in the background (well at least in my head).
Great write sir.
Great write sir.
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15th Nov 2020 11:26am
Re. Stolen moonlight
17th Nov 2020 2:21am
Oh, I really love this one. Pulled me in.
And
"The wrong side of town
No one knows us here
We're Safe"
Been there and it wasn't safe at all. :)
And
"The wrong side of town
No one knows us here
We're Safe"
Been there and it wasn't safe at all. :)
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Re: Re. Stolen moonlight
17th Nov 2020 2:48am
Yeah, me too, safety is a mixed quotient
This was written from an earlier time perspective
Nobody is safe from prying eyes now
Tried to create a film noir kind of feel
Thx
Kx
This was written from an earlier time perspective
Nobody is safe from prying eyes now
Tried to create a film noir kind of feel
Thx
Kx