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Senryu
Breath Of Beauty
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Breath Of Beauty
being attractive
is as natural as breath
for she is beauty
Written by
AspergerPoet56
Published
10th Nov 2020
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She Walks in Beauty
Author's Note
For the "She Walks In Beauty" contest
inspired by his poem she walks in beauty
sometimes less is more
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#beauty
#LordByron
#love
#senryu
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Re. Breath Of Beauty
faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
10th Nov 2020 11:16am
In this case it most certainly is more. You've done a fabulous job on this!
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Re: Re. Breath Of Beauty
AspergerPoet56
10th Nov 2020 12:42pm
As always faith a lovely comment
Thanks for appreciating
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Re: Re. Breath Of Beauty
faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
10th Nov 2020 2:49pm
You are most welcome! You never disappoint me, infact, I'm always in awe of the beauty in what you write. Best of luck to you in the competition!
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Re. Breath Of Beauty
JohnnyBlaze
10th Nov 2020 11:44am
Less can certainly be more. Less cosmetics. Less clothes. Less words .....
AP, glad to see you were inspired by Mister Byron!
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Re: Re. Breath Of Beauty
AspergerPoet56
10th Nov 2020 12:41pm
Ive always liked Byron
Who couldnt be inspired by him
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Re. Breath Of Beauty
buddhakitty
10th Nov 2020 12:39pm
You nailed it. Less is more. Great write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Breath Of Beauty
AspergerPoet56
10th Nov 2020 12:44pm
Without sounding crass or egotistical i thought i did pretty well myself , which is unusual for me to admit
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