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No warning label
Like the clouds blocking the stars from view,
I am hidden by the shadow of you.
Our relationship is unstable,
You're like a bottle of poison with no warning label.
I am hidden by the shadow of you.
Our relationship is unstable,
You're like a bottle of poison with no warning label.
Published 8th Nov 2020
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9th Nov 2020 3:45pm
Forming relationships
is a many splendored thing,
with many sharp edges
mixed in with the many pleasant things
but that being said,
you are as beautiful
as ever in your mind
heart, body
is a many splendored thing,
with many sharp edges
mixed in with the many pleasant things
but that being said,
you are as beautiful
as ever in your mind
heart, body
9th Nov 2020 9:05pm
Nicely proportionate in emotion, sparing use of rhyme and meter. Well rendered. Nice to see something from you sugah.
28th Mar 2021 6:57pm
